The definition of success is getting upgraded with each day. Previously, the one doing extreme hard work used to succeed but nowadays the one combining the latest technology along with hard work and creative people around gets the state of success. I strongly agree with the statement that a successful person must be open to new ideas and should be willing to change his/her mind using three reasons. To elaborate one has to go through scrupulous discussion below.
Firstly, technology is getting updated rapidly. With this the companies should always run in a race to catch up and upgrade their products accordingly. For instance, when we consider apple it releases products periodically with new versions having an extra feature than the previous one. They should be always open to new ideas and different wow factor features to attract their customers to buy products. One mistake would result in loss of billions and also if they are not keeping up with the competitors then they would lack behind.
In addition, invention of a new product is not an easy task. While doing research one has to think of enumerate problems that could effect the result. For instance, there is a cyber attack that had hit the world called Red virus. In order to prevent such attacks the technology companies have introduced quality testing team with a large group of innovative people. Even though one miss a bug the other might catch it. Even at employee level to succeed while working if they are confined in the bubble then they will not be aware of the other things happening around. So, one should be always open and discuss often to influence more ideas.
Furthermore, teacher plays an important role in children life. As the mindset of child changes with each generation the old school type of teaching won't benefit them anymore. For instance, schools these days are using proctors to give children a visual experience of the subject they are studying. Children can see the picture in text book but if they are shown videos of subjects like biology while teaching a topic of digestive system then it would be marked more strongly in their minds and gets a better teaching experience with these creative ideas.
To conclude, many will argue that keeping more hard work with patience is the ultimate key to success. Though it is a factor it is alone not enough to chase their dreams they should think out of box, do more research and should get updated with the recent and more sophisticated ideas and technologies. Open door policy is always the best and would in turn help in huge success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n of a new product is not an easy task. While doing research one has to think of enum...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
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... think of enumerate problems that could effect the result. For instance, there is a cy...
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Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ith a large group of innovative people. Even though one miss a bug the other might catch it...
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'discuss'.
Suggestion: often discuss
...ound. So, one should be always open and discuss often to influence more ideas. Furthermore, ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays an important role in children life. As the mindset of child changes with each ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8374717833 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44928378871 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546275395034 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6189323572 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1739130435 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248050202205 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067379443929 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134417211648 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139088413899 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102164202884 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.