The author of the prompt has argued that people should only undertake risky actions after they have fully considered the consequences such actions entail. With some qualification, I agree with this general proposition. In this essay, I highlight the reasons for adopting this view, while also noting that sometimes it is important to undertake risky activities even when the consequences of such actions remain unknown.
First, in undertaking actions that are essentially risky, we are able to attract scant support for our activities. Indeed, whether it is a new business venture or investment in real estate, we simply cannot gain the social support- in this case, capital-to undertake our actions so long as they are risky in nature. It is only when we carefully consider the consequences of our actions, and thereby remove the ambiguity surrounding the seemingly risk factors involved, that we can convince others to support us in our endeavours. Thus, it is imperative that we carefully consider the consequences of risky ventures in order to attract the support that we need to be successful in the long term.
Second, it is clear that embroiling ourselves in risky activites can cause ir-repairable damage to our well-being. Indeed, when we undertake risky actions, we are basically sailing onto unknown waters. Our family, our income, our prestige, our health-all of these could be compromised when we undertake actions whose consequences we are not well aware of. For instance, we may simply loose our entire wealth if we were to invest in the real-estate industry while not being aware of the fact that housing prices are currently depreciating; hence, the importance of considering the consequences of risky actions.
On a final note, I should admit that sometimes it is simply impossible to be fully aware of the consuequences of risky actions, since the action in question is so unconventional in nature. Yet, if we do not undertake such an action, we may not realize the gains that unconventional ventures have produced throughout history. Indeed, how many business organizations have started out without any cognition of the risk factors involved? The CEOs of such companies then became millionaires because the bad consequences of their unconventional ventures never materialized. Thus, sometimes it is important to take risky actions without even being aware of the potential consequences involved.
Overall, however, it remains the case that people should generally undertake risky activities only when they are fully cognizant of the consequences involved; rarely should they undertake risky ventures to achieve their gains.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...l aware of. For instance, we may simply loose our entire wealth if we were to invest ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36930455635 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01249632984 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489208633094 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1465767998 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.705882353 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170188433922 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701885290571 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582516282203 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124065554208 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621213015157 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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