People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Risky action, by definition, is that which it has the possibilitiy that people might not achieve what they expect throught actions.While proponents of the view that higher risk higer return, applying the case in stock market, believe that risk comes with opportunity, others assert that people need to be meditative whenever they attempt to hold risky position. After weighting the evidence, it is clear that people need to control the risk by full evaluations before any impetuous action being taken.
Considering the example of the investors in Asia stock market thirteen years ago. The economy seemed to be prosperous and adventureous when investors enjoyed the benefits that stocks markest brought, though they were forewarned about the volatile in the market. Consequently, many investors held risker actions than they used to, without considering any consequence that might occur, which further exacerbate the crisis that outbrusted later. So when the economic recession was sweeping out the Asian countries, those who ignored the consequence of prepitiate actions suffered most and resulted in the banks which loaned them.
Likewise, in politics, governors need to fully evaluated the risk might result from the implement of a new policy as capricious adjustments leads to unstailization of society. Twenty years ago, Japan, as the second economic mainstay of world, implemented its unprecedent finance reforms, without being concerned about proper risk evaluations and whether it fitted the national economic development,copying from other countries. Consequently,It caused the scour of mass unemployment in the country and instead of managing the risk, Japan took impetuous action ,at the absence of risk control, implemented the previous plicy back which aggravated the problem. As a result of the prepitiated decisions, the economics collapsed and citizens had to take the consequence that those irresponsible politicians brought them.
Nevertheless, it can be argued that great opportunities are fleeting, particulary those seem extrorndinary. However, what must be addressed is without evaluating the risk that the actions might result and making strategy to avoid, it is impossible to reinforce the chance to achieve the goals.
In final analysis, it is certain that being pensive to the consequence of action is categorical to achieve the results with minimum risk. At the absence of relevant risks evaluations would only lead to unpredictable consequence and maximize the risks.
Sentence: At the absence of relevant risks evaluations would only lead to unpredictable consequence and maximize the risks.
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Sentence: Risky action, by definition, is that which it has the possibilitiy that people might not achieve what they expect throught actions.While proponents of the view that higher risk higer return, applying the case in stock market, believe that risk comes with opportunity, others assert that people need to be meditative whenever they attempt to hold risky position.
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Sentence: The economy seemed to be prosperous and adventureous when investors enjoyed the benefits that stocks markest brought, though they were forewarned about the volatile in the market.
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Sentence: Consequently, many investors held risker actions than they used to, without considering any consequence that might occur, which further exacerbate the crisis that outbrusted later.
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Sentence: So when the economic recession was sweeping out the Asian countries, those who ignored the consequence of prepitiate actions suffered most and resulted in the banks which loaned them.
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Sentence: Twenty years ago, Japan, as the second economic mainstay of world, implemented its unprecedent finance reforms, without being concerned about proper risk evaluations and whether it fitted the national economic development,copying from other countries.
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Sentence: Consequently,It caused the scour of mass unemployment in the country and instead of managing the risk, Japan took impetuous action ,at the absence of risk control, implemented the previous plicy back which aggravated the problem.
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Sentence: As a result of the prepitiated decisions, the economics collapsed and citizens had to take the consequence that those irresponsible politicians brought them.
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Sentence: Nevertheless, it can be argued that great opportunities are fleeting, particulary those seem extrorndinary.
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