Decision making is an important quality required by each and every person. It is often said that any decision taken in rash are often turned to be false. So everyone of us need to understand that all the decision that you need to taken with your when your mind calm and relaxed. Most of people think emotionally and take a decision without considering their future consequences. So I completely agree with the claim that people who make decision from their hearts and then justify then by fallaciously are poor decision makers.
Today's generation is full of competition and race. People in this generation have become selfish and can do anything for success. Many people easily frame a person who is emotionally weak to make him do what they want. Let's take the example of terrorists who are often framed to do a crime in the name of religion. And people who are weak easily get frame and do what the evil thinkers want to do. Then they give any false logic to prove that what they did was right. So people should never think with both his heart and mind before taking any decision.
Many people are myopic in making decision. They only think of near future before making decision. They fail to consider possible consequences in future. Then they give any fallacious reason of their doing. Let's take a hypothetical situation in which a businessmen is planning to acquire a company whose application is trending nowadays. There are many application is trending now and lost far back in the future. If the businessmen don't think of future of the application and just acquired the company based on trend. Then that businessmen will have to face huge amount of losses. Just feel better he just give a false logic of trending which is wrong. So people should have a far-sight thinking before making any kind of decision
Thus, I agree that people who makes decision in rash and by emotion are poor decision maker. They need to think with both heart and mind before making any decision. The decision made should involve a far-sighted thinking. Decision making is technique which all of us should learn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...fallaciously are poor decision makers. Todays generation is full of competition...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217391304348 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.214833759591 0.157235817809 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0639386189258 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0690537084399 0.0497285424764 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0537084398977 0.0444667217837 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112531969309 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0511508951407 0.0406280797675 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48543741358 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281329923274 0.030933414821 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0869565217391 0.0997080785238 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153452685422 0.0249443105267 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0332480818414 0.0148568991511 224% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2189.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 365.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99726027397 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323287671233 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197260273973 0.280924506359 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156164383562 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0876712328767 0.132149295362 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48543741358 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 48.4454309134 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6 23.380412469 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3975366375 59.4972553346 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.56 141.124799967 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 23.380412469 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.674092028746 30% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 34.3260273973 51.4728631049 67% => OK
Elegance: 1.12878787879 1.64882698954 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233539631643 0.391690518653 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109269497372 0.123202303941 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069431446416 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.419845022744 0.547984918172 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103193637547 0.149214159877 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772694514663 0.161403998019 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716500769476 0.0892212321368 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.345644472976 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00624227102052 0.0692045440612 9% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17685392935 0.275328986314 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550207655018 0.0653680567796 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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