People who work in the arts and humanities should earn less than those who work in the sciences and economics because of the benefit of the arts and humanities to the population is less important than that of the scientific or economic endeavors.
The given issue is highly contentious because different people have different opinions on the given topic. Some may go for the topic while others can’t approve it at all. Personally, I believe that science leads toward more important discoveries and inventions and economics is very important for the growth and development of any country. That doesn’t mean people working in the field of humanities and art should pay less. Studying history makes us capable of dealing with difficult situations.
The discoveries made by science in each field are unbelievable. Let’s take medicine for instance. In the past, people were dying as a result of different diseases like cancer, asthma, etc. but due to advancements in the medical sector, people are getting proper treatment and their lives are being saved. Recently, world was facing with the crisis of COVID-19. A large number of people were dying because of it .As a consequences of long and continuous scientific research, people were able to make vaccine for covid-19.These discoveries aren’t confined to the field of medicine. For example: On one hand, due to development in the transportation field, it’s easier for people to go from one place to another and, on the other hand, it saves time.
The economy is an essential factor needed for the country to burgeon. Employment opportunities available in the economy are risky. For example, funds available from other countries to address the serious issues generated by climate change, if not properly utilized by people working there, will directly hamper the growth of the nation and that employee. For handling such a risky job, they should be provided with great income.
However, study done on history (subject of humanities) makes us able to properly cope with difficult situations. Take the war/fight, for instance. The late king Prithvi Narayan shah fought bravely with many small states to unify into one kingdom, i.e. Nepal. Whenever Nepal will be attacked by any other country, we can use that strategy to handle the situation. Let's take another example about diseases and pollution. History shows us that people were less infected by diseases and fewer diseases were prevailing in the past because there wasn’t such more pollution like today. A healthy environment leads towards less spread of diseases and infection, which is important in the field of medicine. So, people working in the field of humanities and art should be paid well.
In the end, we can agree with the statement that people working in the field of science and economics should pay more because the benefit or contribution made by this field towards the development and growth of society and nation is greater. However, we cannot ignore the benefits provided by the arts, humanities and history.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...was facing with the crisis of COVID-19. A large number of people were dying because of it .As a c...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...umber of people were dying because of it .As a consequences of long and continuous...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ber of people were dying because of it .As a consequences of long and continuous s...
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Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
... of people were dying because of it .As a consequences of long and continuous scientific resea...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
... were able to make vaccine for covid-19.These discoveries aren’t confined to the fiel...
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Line 4, column 361, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... that strategy to handle the situation. Lets take another example about diseases and...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d by the arts, humanities and history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17880794702 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67565696487 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525386313466 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.5388409197 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2307692308 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4230769231 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205297484165 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552988581312 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829498212784 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127759844142 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665341507177 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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