The issue at hand suggests that the behavior of people is largely determined by forces or things that are not of their own making. Many may disagree with the above statement and argue that a person's behavior is in his control and only that person is responsible for his behavior around others. However, in my opinion, many external and internal factors can cause a lasting effect on a person's behavior and may even shape his or her behavior.
First of all, how a person behaves with others is dependent on the kind of parenting one undergoes. The behavior of parents towards their child synthesis the behavior of their child in society as he or she grows up. So, a person can take up his or her parent's behavior unconsciously.
Additionally, the environment a person is brought up also gravely determines his or her behavior. The behavior of a person who has studied in a private school will be totally different than that of person who has studied in a public school.
Also, the kind of comfort the current environment provides a person also shapes up the person's behavior. A person will behave totally different in two different environments with the same people, for example, a person's behavior in an overcrowded place with loud music will be totally different when the same person is placed in a serene place.
In sum, the reasons and examples above substantiate my view that the behavior of a person can be determined by things that is not in his control.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...hings that are not of their own making. Many may disagree with the above statement and a...
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Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...th the above statement and argue that a persons behavior is in his control and only tha...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...factors can cause a lasting effect on a persons behavior and may even shape his or her ...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...rivate school will be totally different than that of person who has studied in a pub...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...nt provides a person also shapes up the persons behavior. A person will behave totally ...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ts with the same people, for example, a persons behavior in an overcrowded place with l...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by things that is not in his control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, for example, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78431372549 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69065336535 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8981110759 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137776054162 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713247247912 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628196467011 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877893853576 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455190076001 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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