A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based
There is an unsaid social contract, expected to be followed by every citizen of a country. These contracts have been laid down to ensure proper functioning of a society and safety and well being of its people. As a result one must adhere by them and violation of any such contract should result in a serious mulct.
However, the case is not always black or white. There are situations in which a person might knowingly commit a crime, and breach the social contract. In such a situation it is necessary to determine the circumstances in which the person has taken such a drastic step. For instance a person might have hurt somebody to save his own life or the life of somebody else. The affected might be threatening him, or forcing him to do something against his will. As a result, at the spur of the moment the crime might have been committed. Another thing to be taken notice of if whether the person regrets his crime. He did not mean to hurt the other person and what happened was regretted. In such a case, depriving him of all civil rights is not something that should be done.
However often the crime has been committed for fun or cynical pleasure and there is no explanation for this misbehavior. This might have happened under the influence of alcohol, or might be something that a person does regularly. Threatening, carrying of guns or other ammunition, using abusive unethical language not only break the social contract but also make the life of the affected suffer negatively. The affected might loose his self confidence and be scared all the time of the person threatening him. In such a case, it is necessary to take stern action against him so that the crime is not repeated and lives of people are not put at risk. Denying him any kind of benefit will be helpful in such a case.
Consequently, in my opinion i feel that nobody should have the right of breaking the social contract, and if anyone does so action is necessary. However the circumstances leading him to this crime need to be evaluated before any such punishment is leived.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'another thing', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201005025126 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.193467336683 0.157235817809 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0778894472362 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0527638190955 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0427135678392 0.0444667217837 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105527638191 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.072864321608 0.0406280797675 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58129056968 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251256281407 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123115577889 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0326633165829 0.0249443105267 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100502512563 0.0148568991511 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2076.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 366.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67213114754 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319672131148 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213114754098 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153005464481 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0983606557377 0.132149295362 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58129056968 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 54.3704732154 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1243454862 59.4972553346 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 141.124799967 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 39.6114754098 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.31304347826 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403681932551 0.391690518653 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0843266726328 0.123202303941 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0541069050324 0.077325440228 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486249516236 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0974549602607 0.149214159877 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162183568519 0.161403998019 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645663250417 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434679239587 0.385218514788 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.190716187597 0.0692045440612 276% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275169272625 0.275328986314 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120598478798 0.0653680567796 184% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 10.0 3.66592920354 273% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.