A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The people who break the social contract are the one who commit crime and their civil rights as well as the benefits from their own labour should be retained.
I do agree that a person who breaks the social law is the one who commits crime but i don't think their should be any restrain on their civil rights and as well as benefits from his/her labour. This decision of restraining their rights and benefits should be taken care by the law makers. But me as a part of this beautiful world belevie, the people how commit crime are any how human beings, i think they should be given a chance to change themselves. People might commit crime knowingly or unknowingly or the situations around them might make them commit crime. So taking all this in to account, we should give them a chance to transform themselves to a social being. I think any person is not born with an intension committing crime, as he grows up the situations around him might make him/her to commit crime.
people should be punished for committing crime and once they realise their
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...ain on their civil rights and as well as benefits from his/her labour. This decis...
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... commit crime are any how human beings, i think they should be given a chance to ...
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...ommit crime knowingly or unknowingly or the situations around them might make them commit crime. So takin...
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...tension committing crime, as he grows up the situations around him might make him...
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...nsion committing crime, as he grows up the situations around him might make him/her to commit crime. ...
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... might make him/her to commit crime. people should be punished for committing crime...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.195 0.157235817809 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0880659088768 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0497285424764 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.1 0.0444667217837 225% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.085 0.12292977631 69% => OK
Participles: 0.045 0.0406280797675 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31735159562 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.005 0.0016655270985 300% => OK
Determiners: 0.11 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.045 0.0249443105267 180% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.03 0.0148568991511 202% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1057.0 2732.02544248 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 452.878318584 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59259259259 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.58838876751 81% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338624338624 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.153439153439 0.280924506359 55% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116402116402 0.200843997647 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0687830687831 0.132149295362 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31735159562 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 219.290929204 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 44.4036201879 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 23.625 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7218438044 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.125 141.124799967 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 38.9689153439 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.02985074627 1.64882698954 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370184651857 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189556588361 0.123202303941 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.171610511636 0.077325440228 222% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.599036167867 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.244956489132 0.149214159877 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172879949192 0.161403998019 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810922449468 0.0892212321368 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347125901025 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120302508581 0.0692045440612 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239677491551 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129550198052 0.0653680567796 198% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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