A movie producer sent the following memo to the head of the movie studio.
“We need to increase the funding for the movie Working Title by 10% in order to ensure a quality product. As you know, we are working with a first-time director, whose only previous experience has been shooting commercials for a shampoo company. Since the advertising business is notoriously wasteful, it stands to reason that our director will expect to be able to shoot take after take, without concern for how much time is being spent on any one scene. In addition, while we have saved money by hiring relatively inexperienced assistant producers and directors, this savings in salary will undoubtedly translate to greater expenditures in paying the actors and unionized crew overtime for the extra hours they will spend on the set waiting for the assistant directors and producers to arrange things. If we don’t get this extra money, the movie is virtually assured to be a failure.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
we can understand the concern of the producer of the movie for his request to increase 10% funding for its working title. But before that we need to rethink on the arguments he mentioned in the memo.
The producer said they need an extra of 10% funds for its working title in order to ensure a quality product. But this he is asking 10% extra just for Working title, he did not mention will their be futhure increase in rest of the movie production or will they are going to adjust with the same?
he furthure mentions the director is directing his first movie? how did was the director selected for the movie? based on his talent???
their is no answer for it?, But he sates that the director was working in a commercial ad company, but the directors experience in that company is not clear?
The producer has mentioned that the commercial ad shooting i.e advertising business is notoriously wasteful, there is not point to confirm his claim that the advertising business is notoriously wasteful??
he also states that they have saved money by hiring relatively inexperienced assistant producers and directors, how much have they saved??? he has also mentioned that this savings what they have saved by hiring relatively inexperienced assistant producers and directors,
will undoubtedly translate to greater expenditures in paying the actors and unionized crew overtime for the extra hours they will spend on the set waiting for the assistant directors and producers to arrange things?? this arugument states that they have failed to hire a manger??
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if they have saved money is that money which they have saved hiring relatively inexperienced assistant producers and directors,
is that not enough to complete the movie???
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216718266254 0.25644967241 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.207430340557 0.15541462614 133% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0526315789474 0.0836205057962 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046439628483 0.0520304965353 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0835913312693 0.0272364105082 307% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105263157895 0.125424944231 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0681114551084 0.0416121511921 164% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71395083448 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278637770898 0.026700313972 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0959752321981 0.113004496875 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015479876161 0.0255425247493 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123839009288 0.0127820249294 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1744.0 2731.13054187 64% => OK
No of words: 290.0 446.07635468 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01379310345 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341379310345 0.378187486979 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275862068966 0.287650121315 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21724137931 0.208842608468 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141379310345 0.135150697306 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71395083448 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 207.018472906 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468965517241 0.469332199767 100% => OK
Word variations: 45.2300901389 52.1807786196 87% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7142857143 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9773897431 57.7814097925 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 141.986410481 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.357142857143 0.724660767414 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 5.14285714286 175% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.58251231527 363% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.3004926108 51.9672348444 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.15596330275 1.8405768891 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453832106906 0.441005458295 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156238056891 0.135418324435 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.127627885899 0.0829849096947 154% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.618043413071 0.58762219726 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.370179509047 0.147661913831 251% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205116002855 0.193483328276 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156590519999 0.0970749176394 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.200026980923 0.42659136922 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111620282494 0.0774707102158 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247455927167 0.312017818177 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174633439048 0.0698173142475 250% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.33743842365 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 14.657635468 41% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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