A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Every society is governed by a number of laws and has their own justice system to maintain the law and order in the society. In this statement it is posited that if a person commits a crime willfully, he should not be allowed to have any civil rights ans his contribution in the society should not result in any return to him or her. This is a very harsh decision and there are instances where people are forced to commit a crime. Thus such harsh punishment are not sound in the context of a civil society.
We all live in a society and dependent on each other and every person has their roles. There are laws and law enforcing agencies to maitain order in the society. Still there are many instances where a person can break an established law and commit a crime. now to give an example we can consider a scenario. As life is sacred, thus a person killing another person is highly punishable but there is a possible scenario that he might have been forced into doing that for self defense. Is it possible to blame a person to do something in self-defense? Also, every country has their own order and justice system placed to evaluate the crimes and handing punishment to those who actually deserves it. But ostracizing someone from the society for life for a mistake is very harsh. In the US many states have revoked the right to vote for the convicts which resulted in a shear in the thread of the society.
Furthermore, the way of judging is not the same in every country. For example, it might be a punishable crime to smoke in public in a country and a trivial matter in other country. At the same time, the way of bringing up and the enforcement of established laws plays a vital part in building up the moral base of person. If someone sees that crimes goes unpunished in a society, he might get encouraged to break a law. Before punishing someone we have to understand the motive behing the action. Every nation has set up correctional facilities to retake this persons in the society. Although a crime might have been committed willfully but that does not make a person inherently bad. For example, someone breaking traffic laws to drive an ambulance to the hospital.
Although, we should not make harsh punishment to a person and give them a seconfd chance, but we need to have a effective sytem in place for punishing crimes that are done willfully. Otherwise it might result in higher frequency of that crime. For example, lack of punishment in the cases of rape crime in bangladesh has resulted in high frequency of this crime. there are such intances which call for capital punishment but this should not be the standard for every other punishment for crime.
Thus, a crime should not go unpunished or it might result in repeatation of that crime. Correctional facility and other degree of punishment should be place to reprimand the offender. But every life is sacred, thus a person who commits a crime should not be excluded from the society for good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rights'' or 'right's'?
Suggestion: rights'; right's
...should not be allowed to have any civil rights ans his contribution in the society sho...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...re people are forced to commit a crime. Thus such harsh punishment are not sound in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here are laws and law enforcing agencies to maitain order in the society. Still t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ncies to maitain order in the society. Still there are many instances where a person...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Now
... an established law and commit a crime. now to give an example we can consider a sc...
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Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he might get encouraged to break a law. Before punishing someone we have to understand...
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Suggestion:
...on. Every nation has set up correctional facilities to retake this persons in the...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t up correctional facilities to retake this persons in the society. Although a crim...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...m a seconfd chance, but we need to have a effective sytem in place for punishing ...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...nishing crimes that are done willfully. Otherwise it might result in higher frequency of ...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ency of that crime. For example, lack of punishment in the cases of rape crime in...
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Suggestion: There
...sulted in high frequency of this crime. there are such intances which call for capita...
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Message: Did you mean 'placed'?
Suggestion: placed
...nd other degree of punishment should be place to reprimand the offender. But every li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 531.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6120527307 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55382230448 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41054613936 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 800.1 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5741953082 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4642857143 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9642857143 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157344674652 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473491262623 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487940365326 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111124649618 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449442708542 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.