People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human race very emotional race, they are characterized by writing love poems, songs, novels and ecpress a wide range of emotions like no ther being in this planet. But ehat is the role of this emotions when it comes to decision making. As emotions can highly influence a person thus it can highly influnce the decison the take in an emotional state. Wars and blood sheds in the medieval eras due to just for calling names are cogent example of what decision taken in compulsion can result into. So, it can be said that people who impulsive while taking decisions and trying to put logic behind them later are indeed has very acumen in making any decisions.
Emotions can easily make a person blind for a moment and lead to taking rush decisons. Share market can be a very good example for such place, where making decision is mostly time framed and momentary decision can sometimes make huge difference in terms of earnings. Thus the agents pushings for sales in brokers houses try to get pursue people emotionally. As the very nature of the business here is time dependent, thus sometimes people get emotionally vurnerable and can make decisions on trust and emotion. And no matter what is the outcome in terms of monetary gain or loss, they try to make sense of their decisions by putting logic behind them later.
If we look at the aisan countries like India, Pakistan, Bangladesh, many riots take place just because of some silly issues like not giving pleasentries. Ttere even have been incidents of murder for such simple issues. Another very horrendous thing exists there which is known as "honour killing". Many people has been killed in the name of keeping family honour. In these instants, one might take decision influneced by social mob and implement it without thinking whether it is right or wrong. In such cases, a precious human life can get destroyed. It had been seen later that those people later regrted their decisions.
However, sometimes gut feelings can actually help a person in making very good and cogents decisions. But that is not the case always. If we see the company Tweeter, they were offered to bought at a vey high price even when they were not in their prime because of their CEO didnt feel like it. It later turned out to be a multi billion dollar success story. But that is not always the case, as most of the people lack suck acumen.
Thus, we can come to conslusion that humans are highly influenced by emotions. Thus a person who mainly takes decision based on emotion and try justify it later are mianly poor decision maker as emotion makes a person's judgement impaired and can even led to disastrous results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76293103448 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39871754653 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553879310345 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2964770521 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0833333333 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04166666667 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201119613595 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566772205591 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056036936607 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121167207474 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644111550419 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.