The powerful are most respected when they exercise their power , but not
when they refrain from exercising it."
Someone or something is considered ‘powerful’ when it is intimidating to others. Power is sign of valor and courage. Thus anyone is indeed venerated upon exercising their power.
America is currently considered as the most powerful nation in the world. The notion of it being the powerful all started when it exercised its power to bombard the cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki to cause a massive destruction. The same can be further witnessed in the formation of Bangladesh, then East Pakistan, when India exercised its power to liberate Bangladesh to become a dominant power in South East Asia.
The exercising of power is not just restricted in the top hierarchy. Even Professors in college are respected among students only upon being a total martinet. Still one could argue that upon refraining from exercising one’s power one is still respected. To exemplify, India has several times refrained from attacking Pakistan for its insurgencies, but still is respected and supported globally for its peace loving aspect.
To conclude, to earn respect apart from being powerful one has to show their dominance by exercise their power.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rs. Power is sign of valor and courage. Thus anyone is indeed venerated upon exercis...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... dominant power in South East Asia. The exercising of power is not just restric...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...dents only upon being a total martinet. Still one could argue that upon refraining fr...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 2235.4752809 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00539493213 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 704.065955056 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5879859482 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7272727273 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489649306184 0.243740707755 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18539430077 0.0831039109588 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846841740011 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311180211074 0.150359130593 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327272748067 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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