Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could

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Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

In the given issue it is mentioned that scandals are useful because it can have more impact than any other speaker or reformer.
So, here I would like give my opinion from both the side's at a certain point will agree with and at the same time would like to disagree too, here author put his thought's by supporting on scandals, I would like given my opinion my below.
Firstly, I would like support the argument to get agree with the given scenario, surely the scandals help us in a better way than any other informer or a speaker. Now the question is how, so let’s look at some examples so that we can clear the picture on this. if we see the example of asaram baapu the guru who is used to teach us and show the way of humanity and nonviolence. he found the biggest suspect of same area because he used to hide all the things and were operating hiddenly. if the girl who caught on his scam couldn't take the stand for her justice no one could know that what is happening under the name of trust and the aashram which were registered under the name of asaram bapu. now this wasn’t come to the picture if one would take the stand for this. and no i personally believe that no informer and speaker could able to reveal this matter it was only possible due to the scandal. and now the suspect is paying for the karma he had done. so this is the better way if want to stopped or reveal something which is not good for the society the our culture. So this is how, I would like to agree with given issue.
Secondly if we see this issue from the other perspective like if we disagree with given point. there could be some area's there we can phase some issue that we will see below.
There are many examples in that we can see we personally or the national had a lot of benefits due to the informer and the speakers. like we as a nation have to set the secret mission on something we always go with better informer who stands with us and can surly helps in many ways by providing a lot of sensitive information or the cypher codes which is developed by the opponent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nly. if the girl who caught on his scam couldnt take the stand for her justice no one c...
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...s due to the informer and the speakers. like we as a nation have to set the secret m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23544303797 5.05705443957 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1778862669 2.79657885939 78% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458227848101 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3102507737 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6875 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126326677461 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489327750698 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587201776878 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708475183316 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072133820927 0.0667264976115 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 12.1639044944 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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