Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the history of humankind, the last couple of decades have seen more advancements in healthcare and life sciences than any other time. With the advent of these advancements, certainly the life expectancy has gone up significantly. Some policymakers may argue that the active work force should therefore serve more tenure than before. However, I strongly believe that people should retire at the same age as before and bring more value to their life by spending quality time with their families, nurturing their hobbies and giving back to the society.
This first argument connects timely retirement with spending more quality time with family in light of grown consumer mindset. With the progress in technology and growth in economy, what has also grown drastically is the ever-changing consumer market. For the rich, it is about earning more and more to buy that most expensive car or property and for the poor, it is about earning more and more to constantly match the ever-increasing inflation. In the midst of constantly working and earning, humankind is forgetting to spend quality time with their families. Be is about missing birthdays for important meetings or be it constantly travelling for work away from family. In my opinion, the timely retirement will really enable those family bonds to be intact and at least let people enjoy some time with their near and dear ones.
Notwithstanding the above salient reason, giving time for hobbies and social work further reinforces that retirement tenure should not be extended. To illustrate on the first supportive argument, it is vital for all human beings to have hobbies to uplift their human spirit. Hobbies such as music, art, reading, gardening and the likes have known to have far greater impact on human psychology and health. In today’s time, humans have just become slaves of machines who slog day-in-day out without paying any heed to their inner voice and longing towards their hobbies. While this point does resonate well with reiterating why the retirement tenure should be as it was; I believe mankind also bears the responsibility to give back to the society. While in the work force, we hardly see anyone creating larger impact on our society and fighting for burning issues like pollution, deforestation, uplifting the poor and so on. If the life expectancy has gone up, people should retire and devote their time to social cause.
The factors mentioned above explain and support why the tenure of retirement should be as is, and also emphasis that in today’s world of constant hustle, usually people look forward to their retirement to live a more quality life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, well, while, at least, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09425287356 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63882012413 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3744684463 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156214064767 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555029086256 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051794039396 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111668867979 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208292262836 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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