Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As we are getting impressive sucess in thodays compitetive world, we can surely predict that our next generation woen't face the barriers or the issues that we are having now. for example every day we get stuck in the terrific traffic while going for in the important meeting in the office or reaching to school or collage and we always get late, resone behinde this we are having more number of vehicals than the member in the house which created a lot of pollution and no doubt traffic too.
To tackel this situation we are having lot of opotions in public tranport like trains, buses and metors. as we all know that environment is the most important in crusial thing in our planet. and we can save the environment by by taking a stand get pollution free environment. most of pollution is happening due the increase reate in CO2 and which is generating from vehicles and cars are in the majority of this.
So, taking into consideration we can say surely that after twenty years there will be a few number or very less cars in use.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...s or the issues that we are having now. for example every day we get stuck in the t...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...tranport like trains, buses and metors. as we all know that environment is the mos...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tranport like trains, buses and metors. as we all know that environment is the mos...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...portant in crusial thing in our planet. and we can save the environment by by takin...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: by
...planet. and we can save the environment by by taking a stand get pollution free envir...
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Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...a stand get pollution free environment. most of pollution is happening due the incre...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...that after twenty years there will be a few number or very less cars in use.
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ears there will be a few number or very less cars in use.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 407.700716846 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45465613209 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593582887701 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2109957224 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690642907236 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359497533804 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661607522802 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762256522835 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841596422376 0.0645574589148 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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