Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
some people believe that there will be fewer use cars in the next 20 years because of the shortage of fuel and other materials used for making cars. However, I strongly disagree with this, it's my firm belief that there will be no decrease in the number of cars for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, many researchers predict that in the next twenty years, there are more chances of getting many fuel resources in the depth of oceans, because there are so many areas of oceans still left to research. According to many scientists, there are at least 75 percent area holds many resources. The prediction is kind of showing positive results within a few days because there is a new resource found near the Arabian sea on the continent of India.
In addition, many countries in the world have already started developing electric cars in their industries. some countries have also started giving subsidies on the purchase of electric cars, so people could prefer electric cars more. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. my cousin who lives in norway, recently by a new electric car, and with it he got 20 % subsidies on his car which was paid for by the norway government. for this reason, there are more chances to increase of car users in the future.
In the last, many developed countries made mass production of electric cars as a result the prices of cars would down, and many people can afford these cars. counties like the USA, and the UK place a mission of 2030 where they commit that they will be replacing their all current cars with electric cars. it's certainly clear to see why there will be no shortage in the use of cars in the next twenty years.
To conclude, many people still doubt the future of electric cars and their ability but I am content with my opinion. in light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that there are more cars in use than today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, at least, in addition, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62011173184 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39215281235 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519553072626 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1555879117 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214026755276 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816829795697 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801461791387 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138539213127 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820790262265 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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