Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, there are several reason that make in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today i disagree with and i will reveal in this following essay.
first, we can not denied cars is one of the main transportations used in the world, especially in the developing country, most people uses cars for their activities. increasing the population in this country will increase the use of cars in their activities. for example, after i married, we only using one car for both of us. However, after we have a baby, my wife asked me to buy another car for her so she able to use it with our baby without bothering my time to work. this condition may applied in another couple and will increse the use of cars in our world.
furthermore, the technological development in cars will be another reason why the uses of cars will increas instead of decrease. this issue makes cars used not only for transportation but also as an entertainment and life style. for instance, i have a friend in my college. he has one good car as used for his activities. after few months he bought another electric car for him because this car more relieable for driving in town to save money for gas.
overall, from my perspective we would find in twenty years there will increase the use of cars than we are use today because of increasing population and techological development around the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ne good car as used for his activities. after few months he bought another electric c...
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...driving in town to save money for gas. overall, from my perspective we would find in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57370517928 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67057709719 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8965175027 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31691416136 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147593567728 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117477734184 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264192794725 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122145477735 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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