Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
As the population grows day by day, human being need to figure out the basic necessary things to lead the life.
Always human's try to satisfy their requirement and desire by harming the mother nature and endangered species.
Very few people think about endangered animals risk in future. I agree that we should care for animals and nature,
because there is no end for human's needs which encourage us to harm the animals.
First of all, plants and animals are the foundation of healthy ecosystem. Humans depend on ecosystem for many reasons such as, forests to purify the air, clean the water and protects people from the sun's harmful ultraviolet rays, and floods and many more. for instance, ecosystem provide the conditions for growing food. Food comes principally from managed ecosystems but marine and freshwater systems or forests also provide food for human consumption.
In addition, plants and animals are responsible for variety of useful medications. These species not only save lives but at the same time, provides the raw materials for the pharmaceutical industry. For example, scientists have introduced inventions research that now help to lead the medical industries to get the solution and antidote for various deices and.
Furthermore, humans are busy in developing new things and destroying the nature to make more money and fulfill their desires. If this continues, in future our children can't experiences watching real endangered species and wild forests. Even animals have equal rights as we do, we all should need to keep this thought in mind and also encourage this.
In short, we should save our endangered species for many reasons as mentioned above. Forests and endangered species depends on our ecosystem, it is useful for medicines to save our lives. Children should study and experiences our nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...sic necessary things to lead the life. Always humans try to satisfy their requirement...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ple think about endangered animals risk in future. I agree that we should care for animal...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...aviolet rays, and floods and many more. for instance, ecosystem provide the conditi...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... this continues, in future our children cant experiences watching real endangered sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22972972973 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62450210938 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0493230679 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0588235294 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269135678309 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865965098322 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452399333115 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116425452708 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467726758594 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.