People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making
In the given issue author said about he behavior of people like they are largely determind by forces not of their own. actually it's the most important topic in this generation because nowadays it is happening drasticaly and with majority people. Here i would like give my openion in the both the by accepting and dening it. Although author put the idea in the way hi thing but at the same time forget to taking other assumption in mind. let's see the how it goes if we thing from both the purspective on it.
Firsly, I would like to say or take the topic in accepting maner, because it's being the habit or a rutine of people that don't want to take the efforts or a stand by their own, people are accepting the society in the way of someones decision not by their own stand nowadays many polititions are in society who drives the government by there idea only they are not taking any survays in public or in society instead they are forcing the people to give the vote in the way they want to and not in the favour of public.
If w take the example of any IT company we will surly find the an employee who is more frustrated than other or having many issues with the in going process. However the work hi is doing is not appropriate and he knows about it but still he can't take his own stand on it. even if it is not suitable for the company he his working with.
Secondly, I would like to go with opposite maner by disgreeing the topic, many of the people in the society are becoming more educated are know the facts and low's for their benifit, and also can the stand by analyzing for good or bad moral for a society. So here we can't predict or say like many of the people in society is determind my forces and not of their own choice. and by giving the opinion on the we can surly say there are people in the society who can take their own stand for the their betterment.
So here i would like the end the issue by putting my thought's on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'about the behavior'?
Suggestion: about the behavior
In the given issue author said about he behavior of people like they are largely determi...
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Suggestion: Actually
...y determind by forces not of their own. actually its the most important topic in this ge...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd by forces not of their own. actually its the most important topic in this genera...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...asticaly and with majority people. Here i would like give my openion in the both...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...jority people. Here i would like give my openion in the both the by accepting and...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lets
...get to taking other assumption in mind. lets see the how it goes if we thing from bo...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...get to taking other assumption in mind. lets see the how it goes if we thing from bo...
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Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...king other assumption in mind. lets see the how it goes if we thing from both the pursp...
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Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...in mind. lets see the how it goes if we thing from both the purspective on it. Firsl...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ng the habit or a rutine of people that dont want to take the efforts or a stand by ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pting the society in the way of someones decision not by their own stand nowadays...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ublic. If w take the example of any IT company we will surly find the an employee who...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... example of any IT company we will surly find the an employee who is more frustra...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...e of any IT company we will surly find the an employee who is more frustrated than ot...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... many issues with the in going process. However the work hi is doing is not appropriate...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...iate and he knows about it but still he cant take his own stand on it. even if it is...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...iate and he knows about it but still he cant take his own stand on it. even if it is...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... society are becoming more educated are know the facts and lows for their benifit, a...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... or bad moral for a society. So here we cant predict or say like many of the people ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... my forces and not of their own choice. and by giving the opinion on the we can sur...
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Line 4, column 402, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...wn choice. and by giving the opinion on the we can surly say there are people in the s...
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Line 4, column 488, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...ociety who can take their own stand for the their betterment. So here i would like the e...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tand for the their betterment. So here i would like the end the issue by putting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1914893617 5.05705443957 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17153563145 2.79657885939 78% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433510638298 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.531530639 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223000460766 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833707095697 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118707214798 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1123727881 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837165513894 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.1743820225 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 12.1639044944 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.