"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
In the given argument author is saying there is a number if increase in accident involving the mopeds and pedestrains and also given an suggestion to reduce the number of accident on Balmer island. but here, I find author forget to foucus on other areas too that might be the reasone to the accidents happening on Balmer island, and hestily conclude the topic. let's see the ares which author forget to focus on by taking an examples.
Here author is suggesting to the town council of Balmer Island to set the limit on number of mopeds rented by each of the islands like six moped rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per day during the summer season. here we can not say confidently like if the population is increasing by 100,000 during the summer on Balmer island. what is the rate of posibility that most of them is prefering the moped on rent. Even if majority of people is hiring the moped on rent thean might be many aspets which can become the reason for accidents. If the town council will set the speed limit fro drivers and the riders on island and set the strict low against it surely ther the rate of accident on island will reduce. another suggestion i would like to give here that council of Balmer island will take the stand to give the proper indication and the speed limit boards on the road even that can also help us to reduce the number of accidents. now here author is saying that the pedestrains in also becoming the suspet here we council should build the seperate foothpath for them.
Now there can be another posibility that chould be the biggiest reasone here, the quality of roads in Balmer island what if the town council is compromising with the quality of roads. that becomes the biggest question here.
Author relates Balmer island with its neighbor island and claims that last here there in any 50 percent reduction in moped accidents. on Torseau island by setting the rental limit in moped. here we don't any numbers to deal with and also we cannot say confidently like by considering this suggestion ther is reduce in the accidents. there can be a posibility with the Torseau island the suggetion we have dicussed with Balmer island here Torseau considering the same and having the less number of accidents than Balmer.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 403 350
No. of Characters: 1832 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.48 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.546 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.298 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 50.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 34.623 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.447 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.447 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.213 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e mopeds and pedestrains and also given an suggestion to reduce the number of acci...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...he number of accident on Balmer island. but here, I find author forget to foucus on...
^^^
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lets
...island, and hestily conclude the topic. lets see the ares which author forget to foc...
^^^^
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...island, and hestily conclude the topic. lets see the ares which author forget to foc...
^^^^
Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an example' or simply 'examples'?
Suggestion: an example; examples
...ich author forget to focus on by taking an examples. Here author is suggesting to the town...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...es from 50 per day to 30 per day during the summer season. here we can not say confidently like i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...to 30 per day during the summer season. here we can not say confidently like if the ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...000 during the summer on Balmer island. what is the rate of posibility that most of ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 585, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...e town council will set the speed limit fro drivers and the riders on island and se...
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Line 2, column 712, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...rate of accident on island will reduce. another suggestion i would like to give here th...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 731, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... island will reduce. another suggestion i would like to give here that council of...
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Line 2, column 938, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...p us to reduce the number of accidents. now here author is saying that the pedestr...
^^^
Line 2, column 972, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents. now here author is saying that the pedestrains in also becoming the suspet ...
^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...compromising with the quality of roads. that becomes the biggest question here. Aut...
^^^^
Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t here there in any 50 percent reduction in moped accidents. on Torseau island by...
^^
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... percent reduction in moped accidents. on Torseau island by setting the rental li...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...d by setting the rental limit in moped. here we dont any numbers to deal with and al...
^^^^
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ting the rental limit in moped. here we dont any numbers to deal with and also we ca...
^^^^
Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... by considering this suggestion ther is reduce in the accidents. there can be a posibi...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...estion ther is reduce in the accidents. there can be a posibility with the Torseau is...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 55.5748502994 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62189054726 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33314768698 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422885572139 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.994175828 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.125 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.70786347227 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366471442508 0.218282227539 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132787291125 0.0743258471296 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996169753843 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224677347317 0.128457276422 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841775866446 0.0628817314937 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 12.3882235529 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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