Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
In the given topic author claims about law's and legal system. which seems the much needed thing to take in mind by considering todays generation, in the given topic author saying that the many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. and author also gives the reason for the same, like laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or mind. by this author ends the topic, I would like to give my openion from both tha ways by accepting the fact and denying at the same time, lets have a look in some of the areas where author forget to think.
Firstly, I would to agree the topic by accepting the given fact because in the given author mentioned that many of the problems for modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. But here we cannot say or predict what kind by problems we are showcasing. by considering the give lines we can surely says that the problems of modern society here when it comes to modern we can predict the people llives here are quit more matured than the other we it is obious to thing they would have the mutual understanding between them. So what ever the problems may be they can surely handeled it by their own with taking or considering any law and leagal system, although it seems good but at the time it seems improper to. considering it by moral ethics we being as more matured than then other people or by living in the modern society we should thing about the moral ethics and the law which made foe us to take it seriously and to solve the problems we could face.
Scondly, as i mentioned above that how much it is important for us to the law serious and follow the same it should not be the case that we by ourself solve the problesm without taking any legal action or system may occur the biggest problem in future.
Because the law and the ethic are having the same inportance in our life the same we give to education we all should have the same moral ethics and must know about the law and the legal system which is made for our benifit only,
so by considering the above scenarios I would like to conclude here by putting may thought in both the perspective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hor claims about laws and legal system. which seems the much needed thing to take in ...
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...be solved by laws and the legal system. and author also gives the reason for the sa...
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...ange what is in peoples hearts or mind. by this author ends the topic, I would li...
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... hearts or mind. by this author ends the topic, I would like to give my openion f...
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...g at the same time, lets have a look in some of the areas where author forget to think. Fi...
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...cause in the given author mentioned that many of the problems for modern society ...
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...hat kind by problems we are showcasing. by considering the give lines we can surel...
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...onsidering the give lines we can surely says that the problems of modern society her...
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...between them. So what ever the problems may be they can surely handeled it by their ow...
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...he problems we could face. Scondly, as i mentioned above that how much it is imp...
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...or system may occur the biggest problem in future. Because the law and the ethic are hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36069651741 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13573258611 2.79657885939 76% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42039800995 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.2137910452 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.363636364 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5454545455 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405154984734 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195353167021 0.0831039109588 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12877488234 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193863385228 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144582151072 0.0667264976115 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 48.8420337079 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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