Although it’s a new technology, solar energy provides benefits to the entire world. First, solar energy eliminates our reliance on non-renewable fossil fuels. Additionally, solar energy is non-pollutant, which makes it better for everyone. Finally, there is almost no maintenance as solar panels have a long life span without regular maintenance. So, the benefits seem to be overwhelmingly positive and supportive of further production. The first benefit is the ability for solar energy to reduce reliance on fossil fuels. Many sources of energy are renewable only over millions of years. Unfortunately, humans consume those faster than they are produced. Solar energy could be a replacement for non-renewable sources as a perpetual source of energy. Thus solar energy can become new energy with no legitimate fear of overproduction. Another benefit is the non-pollutant aspect of solar energy. Burning fossil fuels is known to produce deadly pollution, while solar energy produces zero harmful byproducts. While current energy sources produce disgusting smells, sounds, and visuals, solar energy produces nothing offensive. Therefore, when considering the health of the planet, the lifelong health benefits of solar energy are unparalleled. Finally, solar energy has low costs. The cost of solar panels is a one-time purchase. Also, after installation, the lifespan of a solar panel is thirty years. After the initial cost, the solar panel will cost almost nothing. This is a benefit to personal finances, but also peace of mind since there is no worry about rising prices or lack of resources. In conclusion, these benefits provide support for more people to consider switching to solar power. Both the renewable aspect as well as the non-polluting aspect means that there will be added benefits for individuals, cities, and the planet. The low lifelong cost of installation and maintenance provides a lifetime of benefits. Thus, solar energy looks to be one of the world’s great ideas.
In the given passage author "States that", Although its a new technology, with respect to solar energy it is providing such wast benifits to the entire world. and if we listen to the audio same benefits
mentioned.
If we see this aspect being as a human being it require more and more energy to live the life with fastest running world in terms of industrial development and lot many aspects. it is mentioned in the given passage that the solar energy in non-pollutant and which makes it better for every one and also can help to the environment system. due to this quality this make to hold the market for many years. and we see it in terms of services it having the life of 30years which is more than
enough.
In
the audio file professor is giving a idea to students like how the solar energy can helps us and at the same time keeping environment safe. professor mentioned all the points as given in the passage like he said solar energy is pollution free and it has a lot benefits like to reduce the reliance on fossile fules. many sources are renewable only over millions of years. and this help solar energy to stand out of the box with such
benefits.
As
we have mentioned about the life span of solar panels, it is very much cost effective and dosen't produce any kind of sound, smell, and the vibrations. and in the video also professor mentioned about the presonal finance benefit how it can help you to same a money in effective manner, and conculde his statement by putting his thoughts as mentioned on the passage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...uthor 'States that', Although its a new technology, with respect to solar...
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Suggestion: And
...such wast benifits to the entire world. and if we listen to the audio same benefits...
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Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
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...e this aspect being as a human being it require more and more energy to live the life w...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the fastest'.
Suggestion: with the fastest
...e more and more energy to live the life with fastest running world in terms of industrial de...
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...lso can help to the environment system. due to this quality this make to hold the m...
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...make to hold the market for many years. and we see it in terms of services it havin...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
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... students like how the solar energy can helps us and at the same time keeping environ...
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...o reduce the reliance on fossile fules. many sources are renewable only over million...
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...energy to stand out of the box with such benefits. As we have mentioned abou...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, kind of, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60071942446 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44025181951 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4781237725 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06452816374 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303953484626 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107092826035 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927360265995 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177638177718 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793012181549 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.