Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
Scandals can have adverse affects on a society. But they play a crucial role in bringing the attention of general public to alarming situations in the society which needs to be resolved in a way that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Primarily, Scandal encourages actual actions. It is not very effective if a speaker or reformer address a particular issue until the general public know its affects. Scandal helps people realise the urgency of the issue and encourage them to put pressure on the authority to resolve it. If not for scandals, the people of the society would not gather enough courage to raise voice against a particular issue.
Now, let us consider an example of India. In India, corruption is prevalent in almost every economic sector of government. People do not hesitate much to give bribe to government officer in order to hasten their proceedings. But when major corruption scandals of millions of dollars occur in the country, it is then when people realise that their money is being misused and raise their voice against the matter.
Scandals helps in making our judiciary system more powerful and effective. Because when people raise their voice in large numbers, it does not leave government with any other option rather than introducing laws and bills that would counter the given issue. Hence, it prevents for such a situation to rise again and affect more number of people than it previously did.
At last, it also important to consider the affect of the scandal on the people directly or indirectly related to it. A scandal at a large scale may do more harm than what is repairable and may ruin lives of many people completely. But scandals do help in dealing with the demons of the society in ways no speaker or reformer ever could, by bringing laws against it. Hence, scandals can be consider a necessary evil.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ucial role in bringing the attention of general public to alarming situations in the society w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...er address a particular issue until the general public know its affects. Scandal helps people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... for such a situation to rise again and affect more number of people than it previously did...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87341772152 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51833526322 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2340966766 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5882352941 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155938708434 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04992578396 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686280639553 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988697224322 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812158708972 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ucial role in bringing the attention of general public to alarming situations in the society w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...er address a particular issue until the general public know its affects. Scandal helps people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... for such a situation to rise again and affect more number of people than it previously did...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87341772152 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51833526322 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2340966766 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5882352941 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155938708434 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04992578396 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686280639553 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988697224322 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812158708972 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.