Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
There are innovations and improvments daily on science and technology and it is assumed that one day it will be able to solve all of society's problem. I strongly believe that one day science and technology will be able to solve all our society's problems.
In present day life, we have seen a lot of improvment in science and technology in different areas, we now have more sophisticated automatic cars which can drive themselves as opposed to manual gears which is stressful and difficult to operate especially while travelling on a long distance and these self drives decreases stress for drivers hereby solving one of society's problem "stress" . We also have electric cars which requires power to charge them as opposed to fuel which might soon be obstinate.
Internet and Phones have been able to help our present day society in solving communication problem as against letters which takes a lot of time to arrive at different locations especially when sending them to different countries, but with recent technologies, you cannot only pass your information to family and friends across the world at the speed of light but you could also see them through video calls. This saves us the risk and stress of transportation to visit and stay with our family and friends thereby also giving us avenue to keep in touch.
A lot of new innovations aid our everyday life in different areas and this reduces manual labour and risk of danger at different work locations. An example can be found in construction sites where machines can mix gravels and cements with the operator just using the buttons to instruct the machine as against the primitive and manual way of labourers mixing them. Hospitals also use some sophisticated equipments and scan which gives almost accurate diagnosis and also proffer solution to different ailments.
Although there are some hazards and risks which often come with these new innovations like self drive cars are prone to accidents when something different from the usual occurs but they solve a lot of society's problem.
From the new innovations in present day life it can be infered that soon science and technology will solve all society's problem .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 364.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04395604396 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73991272516 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.8473053892 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.05600844 57.8364921388 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.909090909 119.503703932 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0909090909 23.324526521 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.70786347227 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276784998646 0.218282227539 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127855223953 0.0743258471296 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112911364395 0.0701772020484 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161812838966 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109481907801 0.0628817314937 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.3799401198 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.1389221557 136% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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