Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
In Today's world, science and technology has made tremendous improvements in our day to day life, and solved the so many problems we have .be it mobile phones where we can use it for most of our work like talking to the other people across the world.computer and the internet connects from one corner of the world to other corner of the world within seconds. But all the problems can not be solved by the technologies and the science.
Problems faced within society are varies from place to place and versatile.Mankind live in the society, society have so many problems which can not be solved just by the machines. Example , in our society we face gender criticism where dominant gender group tried to influence other gender group and making biased treatement.we have recism problem in our society where many black people get criticised for their colour . we read lot about sexual harassment at the workplaces and in the society in daily news papers. all the mentioned problems we have in our society are being commited from individuals only.there problem deal with the peoples emotions and the affects the individual lives , which can be easily understood by the machines.
Some cases like autism to understand what autism affected person wants at a perticuler moment and how we make them understand the social norms,cultural behavier with other individuals. psycological related deases need the human feelings to deal with the patient , doctor need to know all the background of the patient and what is conditon of the person what medicines are needed to cure it.
the analysis which docter provides can not beat the machines which does not have feelings.
However, In the 21st centure the technology have evolved so much that now we dont have to be scared for some of the dedly deseases. even with the help of technology and the computaion we were able to indentify cancer deseases beforehand, which earlier used to take months and lot of expertise in the pertucular field. Technology has made imense improvement to out day to day lives and the medical field as well. But technology can not solve problem's like poverty , discrimination, racism,mentally challenged person's feelings, we need the human toch and the awareness in the society .
Sience and technology is not enough to solve all the problmes in the socienty .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00515463918 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7771286464 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9845916174 57.8364921388 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.714285714 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 23.324526521 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339369554151 0.218282227539 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128991431386 0.0743258471296 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106527048253 0.0701772020484 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160197924252 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109816730791 0.0628817314937 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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