Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
A unworried, happy, secured life is a dream of many human societies. Every person works hard to see that their family is living a secured and comfortable life. There are many different problems faced by a society due to many different reasons, but the advancement in science and technology has eased many of their problems. The authors claims in the above prompt that science and technology will one day solve all of society's problems. It is not doubt judicious to agree with the author since we have seen a great increase in the comfort of living comparing with that during 20th century. But one cannot agree that all of the society's problems can be solved by technology.
One of the major problem of every nation is the national security of any nation, which in today we have seen that technology has enabled us to maintain a strict border security and which in turn has made a relief to every person that they can freely enjoy their lives without worrying about any attacks. Also, technology has helped by breaking all the barriers ensuring a healthy and save daily commodities. Milk productions during 20th century were approximately half which we can see now. With the help of science we are able to make tools and machines which has led us to an automatic milk storing from cattles and which inturn increases the milk productions. Today every person can find a a good quality of milk at any where in the world. Considering all these advances, one can say that technology has definately helped us in easing our problems.
But, many problems such as poverty, lack of education systems are not a case where science can help to remove these barriers. Africa still currently has 49% poverty rate and 75% lack of poor education. Many political problems has hindered such developments. This is not the case of Africa alone but many isolated place around the world faces the same problems where a poor nation economy, lack of proper government system has avoided them to grow. Science and technology in such places is peripheral since one cannot expect any advancement in technology if there is no proper education provided to the nation.
The prompt, where is stands right now, it is very difficult to make such a nuanced judgement because even though world has gained a power in technology there are many places which has not smelled the aroma of science still today. Definately many problems has been solved and also there are many hopes that one can live a better life in future, but one cannot conclude whether all the society's problem can be solved by science and technology.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
A unworried, happy, secured life is a dre...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...secured and comfortable life. There are many different problems faced by a society due to many...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rent problems faced by a society due to many different reasons, but the advancement in science...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'claim'.
Suggestion: claim
...sed many of their problems. The authors claims in the above prompt that science and te...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 616, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...20th century. But one cannot agree that all of the societys problems can be solved by tech...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...roductions. Today every person can find a a good quality of milk at any where in th...
^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...roductions. Today every person can find a a good quality of milk at any where in ...
^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...roductions. Today every person can find a a good quality of milk at any where in th...
^^^
Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...on can find a a good quality of milk at any where in the world. Considering all these adv...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...poor education. Many political problems has hindered such developments. This is not...
^^^
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y hopes that one can live a better life in future, but one cannot conclude whether all th...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80493273543 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49888973718 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473094170404 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4061349566 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.789473684 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4736842105 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73684210526 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356394349348 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115034838975 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143647073033 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228104361573 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1017431664 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
A unworried, happy, secured life is a dre...
^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...secured and comfortable life. There are many different problems faced by a society due to many...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...rent problems faced by a society due to many different reasons, but the advancement in science...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'claim'.
Suggestion: claim
...sed many of their problems. The authors claims in the above prompt that science and te...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 616, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...20th century. But one cannot agree that all of the societys problems can be solved by tech...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...roductions. Today every person can find a a good quality of milk at any where in th...
^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...roductions. Today every person can find a a good quality of milk at any where in ...
^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...roductions. Today every person can find a a good quality of milk at any where in th...
^^^
Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...on can find a a good quality of milk at any where in the world. Considering all these adv...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...poor education. Many political problems has hindered such developments. This is not...
^^^
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y hopes that one can live a better life in future, but one cannot conclude whether all th...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80493273543 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49888973718 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473094170404 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4061349566 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.789473684 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4736842105 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73684210526 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356394349348 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115034838975 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143647073033 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228104361573 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1017431664 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.