Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
According to the prompt, it is predicted that in the near future, Science and technology will serve as a pancea to all kinds of predicaments and quagmires faced by the society today.I strongly agree with this statement and the reasons for which I will be expounding in this essay.
Firstly, we have advanced and progressed in every aspect of life today, this is mainly due to science and technology. Today, we cannot imagine a world without technology, for instance each and every individual owns a phone, from children of the age 6 to the elderly. In the olden days, telephones were rare and were considered anachroistic, but today anyone without a mobile phone for few minutes makes them restive and fraught. Another vivid example to this would be the computers replacing teachers these days, everything is available online, from online courses to completion of a degree. There is no need for one to attend classes physically, and especially with pandemic taking over, the schools have also started online classes. This being the case, has made laptops arrantly indispensible source of learning.
Secondly, the Science Technology Engineering and Mathematics programs that is abbreviated as STEM programs are in high demand more than ever. Many students opt for undergraduate courses in computer science, or biotechnology or civil engineering to name a few. The most trending jobs in 2021 according harvard review commitee are in Robotics, Artifical Intelligence and cyber security. This is because the job prospects in such industries is augmenting dramatically. Especially India, the country which has the highest number of people in the age range of 20-40, is like a factory of engineers and almost 50 lakh students graduate as an engineer every single year according to a study conducted by the Government of India.
Lastly, there is a myriad researches currently going on in the field of science and technology. For example, In India almost 50 crores is spent annually on research for finding a cure for detrimental diseases like diabetes and cancer that increasing ubiquitous today. The government is pouring money magnanimously into research and development because it is the only way to make world a better place. And to encourage youngsters to pursue a career in research they have initiated several grants and awards for the same. Another instance of the same would be the whole world struggling to find a drug that is efficacious to cure COVID-19. Without the developments in technology and science we would have a vaccine for this behemoth of a disease this early, becasue it usually takes almost 10 years to produce a single drug.
In conclusion, Science and Technology is the backbone of a nation's development and will solve every quagmire that is to come in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12253829322 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87542172948 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560175054705 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1443346115 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.210526316 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0526315789 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127775781865 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377900160965 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485727496073 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937069399241 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622027680048 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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