scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people. do you agree or disagree?
The author of the issue embraces the idea that scientists and researcher should concentrate on areas that are beneficial for the whole people in the world. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that scientists should bend over backward and make efforts to help people live in a thrived and flourished society without trials and tribulations, which can create some disruptions. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, scientists play a pivotal role in any given society owing to their discoveries and explorations that are advantageous for a large number of people. Broadly speaking, these discoveries will help people to confront obstacles and barriers successfully. As a palpable example, in recent years, vast majorities of people suffered from various diseases like cancer, diabetes, bronchial problem and so forth. But with the advent of sophisticated technologies and scientists' progression of knowledge, there is no more problem with these diseases. Indeed, scientists' discoveries and explorations made it possible for human beings to fight with these horrific diseases. To elucidate more on this issue, not only can people benefit from scientists' research in their personal lives, but also can lead to a salubrious life.
Another salient point in corroborating my stance is that a plethora of people had some difficulties to lead the healthy life and eat nutritive meals. If we take a minute to ponder over it, eat healthy food play a consequential role in people's lives and people have to shun unhealthy meals owing to the fact that it could have deleterious effects on their lives. For instance, people need to stay healthy, so, scientists made a progress in agriculture, improve their research and provide fertile ground for people to rely on healthy crops. With this research, hardly can people complain about eating habit and unhealthy foods due to the fact that it helps individuals distinguish which food is healthy and which is not. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that not only can scientists' discoveries and explorations influence people's lives positively but also can help people to increase their awareness about the different realm.
However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, some of the scientists' work may not have direct relevance to people's lives. As a tangible example, astronomy is a field that scientists are working on it for many years with spending a vast sum of money. But today's no one could prove its influence on people's lives because the future in unpredictable and researcher should rely on fields that are beneficial for human beings. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal stance.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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... of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, broadly speaking, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2625.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16732283465 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92227509047 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.483019446 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1904761905 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155184125288 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482745090245 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051163140207 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821637946169 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466691658387 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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