Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
The world consists of a variety of species covering a wide spectrum of uniqueness and it is the ultimate responsibility of human beings to safeguard these species. However, if the extinction of such species is due to nature then human intervention won't affect. Therefore, I mostly agree with the prompt that society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities because of the following reasons.
Nature plays a significant role in balancing the environment. It is responsible for maintaining the proper decorum of society. This can be understood by a simple example of a food chain. In the food chain, the number of every species is dependent on every other species, and hence here comes the role of nature. Moreover, the extinction of the dinosaurs was an effect of the natural cause. It was the call from nature to extinct the dinosaurs and hence if nature is responsible for the extinction of any species then whatever efforts made by humans to safeguard those species won't get in the way and the results will be negative.
However, nowadays people are the major catalyst of eradicating the environment. People are involved in a myriad of activities that are impairing nature and ultimately causing harm to the species. For instance, people are constructing roads, highways, bridges, involved in hunting activity, etc, amid the forests resulting in deforestation that is leading to the killing of the species who are majorly dependent on the forest for their food and shelter. In addition, the species while crossing the roads or the highways for their food requirements are being hit by cars or trucks leading to the killing. Statistical data of the killing of the animals besides the roads and highways yearly are catastrophic. There are around ten thousand killings of animals due to road accidents. Hence, the government should take crucial measures to ensure the safety of the species from human activities.
Government should put in laborious efforts to control the environment and should impose several environmental laws to ensure the safety of every species. The government of the society should put employees in the forest to monitor the activities of the humans and to impose harsh punishments if they see any violation. This would help to produce awareness among the people of the society and will impart welfare for the society and the environment.
To conclude, it is important to put restrictions on human activities to fence the endangered species. Many species are on the verge of extinction due to human intervention. Some of the species in India, like Black Panther, are only a few in numbers due to humans' mass hunting, and therefore to keep a balance in the environment it is necessary to limit human activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08369098712 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87950609993 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452789699571 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6315061045 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.681818182 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457003434224 0.243740707755 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116102372779 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152374687905 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264921180373 0.150359130593 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169297314612 0.0667264976115 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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