Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Corporations were created to make money. However, that is not to say they believe in valuing their customers and showing appreciation through attaining quality status and entertainment. I therefore partially disagree with the notion that corporations have a responsibility to the society they find themselves in for three reasons.
To begin, corporations do not exist solely because they found a method of obtaining money and are greedy. They worked through their challenges in order to accomplish their goals as entrepreneurs and are benefitting others through their hard attained work. In one instance, Amway was built by entrepreneurs wanting to create more jobs, and to make money, ultimately. Their hard work enables hundreds of people to have jobs from which they can live by. However, some individuals may have forced them to promote more than jobs. Companies can actually use this incentive given them from either their state legislature or their consumers in order to advertise themselves. This can be seen in a public demonstration such as sponsorships. This gives the company a headway into searching for promotions regarding their company, in addition to demonstrate their willingness to contribute to their established consumer niche.
Secondly, many corporations exist as small businesses, such as a family owned donut shop. These smaller corporations contribute widgets such as entertainment or gourmet food for their society or environment. They are already giving a huge share of their time in presenting high quality products for those circumstances they find themselves in. This does not necessarily prove those companies should display some forced public demonstration like the bigger companies because they may not have as much money to spend on that type of “responsibility.” Smaller companies should be dealt less expectations by their society or environment due to their income being significantly less than most larger and more well-known companies like McDonalds or Amway corporations.
Third, Corporations should be viewed as one individual putting in a strong effort into making a living. Perceiving corporations in this way, presents people with a notion that corporations have faced numerous challenges with state tax laws and a myriad of criticisms that they have the right to earn a significant amount of money, though they also give generously back to whomever has indulged in what they sell or services provide. This view may hold merit in that corporations in one sense are in the business of obtaining an exorbitant amount of money. Nevertheless, those companies are willing to hire individuals and compensate them for their work, as well as hopefully provide quality assurance in their products and services.
In conclusion, corporations have a responsibility to obtain a substantial amounts of money in order to provide for themselves, their employees and to continue their hard work. However, corporations are also willing to establish public displays for their own interest, such as advertising and creating work for people, but also to build positive rapport for their environment they operate at; their contribution to their society can potentially create a positive rapport for the city itself by improving its economy and the amount of jobs it creates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun expectations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ity.” Smaller companies should be dealt less expectations by their society or enviro...
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Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'larger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: larger
...ir income being significantly less than most larger and more well-known companies like McDo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2800.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45808966862 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12741408414 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504873294347 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 865.8 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.272322692 60.3974514979 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260874545874 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856401982058 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536863898757 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170911273983 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550563311512 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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