Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The issue claims that some people believe corporations are responsible for the well being of societies and the environment beside their main responsibility of making money, others believe only the later part. Here, corporations will be interpreted as business corporations. Business corporation means a large company or a group of companies. In this modern age, this kind corporations are being well flourished. They are ubiquitous. They are the main drive of our economy. But they should not only focus on economy. Their industrial waste can pollute our environment. They should also do some charity works for our society.
There are several reasons for why corporations should have a responsibility for societies and environment. For environment, they should have a controlled way to reduce industrial waste in their factory. Yes there are also city corporations for cleaning this industrial waste, but if they are carelessly produce huge amount of waste things, then environment must be polluted badly. In today's world, all have a main concern about environment because of this kind of environmental pollution. Now we have less ice in arctic region, high rise of sea water, less rain. Our ozone layer are being such state that they can not protect us from harmful UV ray. Industry produce huge amount harmful gas such as greenhouse gas ( carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide etc) and CFC gas (chlorine etc). Industry are one of the main reason for climate change and global warming. That, why all kinds of corporation should have a responsibility for the well being of environment.
For society, they also should have a bunch of social works. They can do some charity works from the profit they earn. They can produce a well trained employees. For this they can arrange more internship facilities in their companies. Our students will be more benefited. They can sponsor and subsidize on research activities. They can make a well waged workers community. They can also have a responsibilities on their company employees' family. If a worker get injuries or even die in their factory, they should stand beside that worker's family.
It is okay to make money. But money is not everything. Yes, there are other social corporations for the well being of our society and environment. But Business corporations are not outside of these corporations. If they ignore and become careless about society and environment, our earth will not be a better place for living and surviving.
In conclusion, the issue can be resolved to everybody's satisfaction, but in the long run, promoting my position on this issue will lead to the betterment of our society and environment. To assess the merits of a situation or decision, it is essential to have full knowledge of all contributing factors otherwise this kind of issue remains unsubstantiated and open to debate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'produced'.
Suggestion: produced
...trial waste, but if they are carelessly produce huge amount of waste things, then envir...
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Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'produces'.
Suggestion: produces
...rotect us from harmful UV ray. Industry produce huge amount harmful gas such as greenho...
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Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mount harmful gas such as greenhouse gas carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide etc and ...
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Line 3, column 754, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide etc and CFC gas chlorine etc. Industry are one o...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an make a well waged workers community. They can also have a responsibilities on the...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a responsibility' or simply 'responsibilities'?
Suggestion: a responsibility; responsibilities
...d workers community. They can also have a responsibilities on their company employees family. If a...
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Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
... factory, they should stand beside that workers family. It is okay to make money. B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2387.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14439655172 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95781926766 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467672413793 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.402029726 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2058823529 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6470588235 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335735804824 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962358712384 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819227090077 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201414808899 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108675731997 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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