Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented
Corporation, by definition, is a legal entity created by individuals, stockholders, or shareholders for the purpose of making a profit. I, therefore, agree with the first part of the prompt which says that companies have a duty to support their host communities and the environment and are not only concerned with making money. The reasoning for this position is listed below.
Firstly, companies that desire a smooth run will empower the youths of the society they are located. When community members are empowered by companies in their community, it gives them a sense of belonging and as such will go to any length to protect the corporation in times of crisis which could be a communal clash. On the contrary, if the company had neglected the people of the host community and focused only on making a profit, then no one will be willing to protect the company in times of crisis.
Secondly, most industrial waste is harmful to the environment, and as such the companies will need to follow proper regulatory measures in the disposition of their waste so as not to contaminate the environment. For example, one of Nigeria's business tycoons, Aliko Dangote runs his refinery in a community in Ogun state. In addition to giving preference to the indigenes of the community during recruitments, he also yearly sponsors the outstanding students in that community as well as taking proper disposition measures in disposing of its waste to be safe for the environment. inevitably, such actions give the people of the society a sense of belonging and strive to ensure the company runs unperturbed.
Thirdly, corporations whose focus is on maximizing profits alone run at the detriment of their host community as it is in no way adding value to the lives of the locals but had rather taken up their land and pollutes the air they inhale. in some cases, waste from these companies leaks into water bodies, contaminating their water and killing water lives.
In summary, corporations should take responsibility to promote the well-being of their host society rather than being focused on maximizing profits to other people's detriment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Inevitably
...s waste to be safe for the environment. inevitably, such actions give the people of the so...
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Suggestion: In
... land and pollutes the air they inhale. in some cases, waste from these companies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, in summary, as well as, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04249291785 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92053837758 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535410764873 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2171812586 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.923076923 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2307692308 5.21951772744 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165717736994 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591510121264 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646262745949 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108300396007 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077027521534 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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