Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are several important factors that are considered in relationships. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose to tell the truth always to be the most important consideration for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
First, going by the popular saying, “The truth will always set you free”. Telling the truth has a way of liberating someone eventually in any situation. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was working as a salesperson in a retail store, I once attended to a particular customer that insisted that he has paid me for an item he took, whereas, he hadn’t and was insisting on it. It drew the attention of our manager and for him to calm the situation, he asked the customer to go with the item since he maintained that paid me. The money for the item was deducted from my wage for the day despite my plea that I did not receive any money from the customer. The very next day, the customer returned to our store pleading with me that he later saw the money in his pocket. He returned the money and gave me a huge sum of money. My manager felt embarrassed and at the same time pleased with me. As a result, I was appraised and promoted for that month. If I had not stood by the truth that the customer had not paid me for the item, I would not have been promoted nor appraised.
Secondly, Telling the truth makes you valued. People tend to respect and admire you when you are known for saying the truth. Drawing from my own experience, I come from a family of four siblings and I am the last child. Each of my siblings has their strengths and capabilities, but I was known to always tell the truth irrespective of the situation. This made my parents love me in a special way. If I was not known for telling the truth always, I probably would not have a special place in my parent’s hearts.
Finally, Telling the truth leaves an undeletable mark of you on people. It is no news that most people love to associate with people they find trustworthy, as a result, you become a valued asset to people around you.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe without a modicum of equivocation that telling the truth always is the most important consideration in relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49883990719 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71781198957 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475638051044 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9490069205 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1363636364 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191629398009 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663987898331 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632457383344 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145303835767 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485911660523 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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