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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both views presented.

The biggest barometer for a city’s successful finances and economic regulations in this age is the corporate portfolio it hosts in their jurisdiction, thus when these companies with this high value, start acting towards society and environmental needs, changes will start becoming evident soon than one can imagine. Here the topic suggests thar corporates have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the society and environment which they operate in. Personally, I completely agree with the corporations exercising their resources for the help of the communities but the “responsibility” part of enforcing it on them is where I have my reservations. Thus, I agree with the statement on the corporations helping their environment but the all or nothing attitude around it seems to be excessive.
Firstly, despite getting all the relaxations from the government corporates, corporates do not usually value the environment or society, and are ready to let them have the bullet for the chance of earning an extra nickel. Thus, when corporates will start increasing their outreach to the community and increase their CSR activities, it can begin a two-way street of showing trust and care. The corporates more often the not have the budgets, in order to cause some meaningful change in people’s lives. If there is something, that the recent pandemic taught us, it is that finally it us humans that are of the utmost help to each other in the time of crisis and keeping everybody around you healthy will be your best chance at a healthy life. Secondly, corporates are a perfect example of amalgamation of cultures, and with good intent they can cause major difference in bringing light to and ameliorate major sociological problems like race, gender disparity etc. Say, a company X, brings in a policy to hire equal people among all genders, or have a plan for strategically hire people among various races and socio-economic levels. Then all the company still has to do is search for a talented candidate, but in disguised way will be of help to the society by at large.
Furthermore, on the environmental issues, the corporates receive so much from the environment around them, thus some nurture and care back should be part of their CSR activities. Companies come in a position of leverage with most governments, so if they get invested in the environment, they can cause a major up heal in the ongoing environment crisis around the world. Meanwhile to show short term support, they can organize easy to do activities like tree plantation, beach cleaning, streets cleaning, stadium cleaning etc to reduce the load on using labour. To aide that, within their own premises, small starts like recyclable cutlery, lessen the energy usage in their office, carpooling etc can also cause significant impact on wastage of resources.
Finally, before concluding, even though most of the statement has many positive aspects to make you consider it, but that can be done only if we are aware of the shortcomings of the “all or nothing” tone of the statement. It is a cut-throat market out there, and it is not any company’s responsibility to help everyone along their way. This is the exact reasons many governments and non-profit organisations usually exist. As long as these companies stay within the legal limits and don’t cause direct/indirect harm, they should be allowed to operate at peace.
In conclusion, corporates helping with the environment will really help fleet the process, and help achieve tangible results in shorter amount of time, but they shouldn’t be forced or made be held responsible to forcefully help the community around them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...es, the corporates receive so much from the environment around them, thus some nurture and care back should...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
...us some nurture and care back should be part of their CSR activities. Companies come...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ng environment crisis around the world. Meanwhile to show short term support, they can or...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: TO_AIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to aid'?
Suggestion: To aid
...etc to reduce the load on using labour. To aide that, within their own premises, small ...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding community'?
Suggestion: the surrounding community
... be held responsible to forcefully help the community around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3072.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 599.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1285475793 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94716853372 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9889908859 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 324.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540901502504 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 968.4 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0689143594 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.6 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.95 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274524331526 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08806568858 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959978202577 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153456353769 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530404131263 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 100.480337079 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.8971910112 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments