Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-
being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
I concur to having corporations take responsibility to promote well-being of the society and environment they operate in as operating in such society and environment makes that a part of it too, causing their operations to be of impact to them.
It is well said that a tree cannot make a forest. Corporations thrive because societies and communities exist. An automobile corporation exists due to need of members of the society to move from one place to another. If such an organisation neglects the well-bieng of the societies and environments in which they operate, they run the risk of not knowing their other important needs which make hinder them to stop patronising the corporation which means less money for them. People care less about transporting them selves when there is a pandemic on the loose. A supportive environment is essential to making more money.
Environments should take responsibility for the impact of their actions on others as.Money does not answer all things. Climate change as an example.
It is also worthy of note that when corporations operate within the confines of the law and others in the society do as well. which is an independent regulatory body. They can rest assured that as long as the law is all-encompassing, there is no cause for alarm. Now, while this can be very efficient way to go, there will alway come outliers to that defined by the law. In such situations, the best course of action would be for the corporation whose purview fall within the issue to be proactive in solving the problem.
Therefore, given the gravity of the undesirable impact that can arise from not taking responsibility, it is better to have corporations take responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lace to another. If such an organisation neglects the well-bieng of the societies...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
...em. People care less about transporting them selves when there is a pandemic on the loose. ...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Money
...he impact of their actions on others as.Money does not answer all things. Climate ch...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...w and others in the society do as well. which is an independent regulatory body. They...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...w and others in the society do as well. which is an independent regulatory body. They...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 298.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01677852349 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04694475632 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 72.2955661772 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454670584464 0.243740707755 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132839302382 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12178335879 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263620872495 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122152582234 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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