Young people enjoy life more than older people do | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Young people enjoy life more than older people do.

Youth is the essence of life. While some people may think that older people enjoy life more, I affirm that the inverse is the case. As a life wasted can never be regained, only with the energy of youth can anyone attain the fullest of happiness.
Let's start with the mundane things. One of the things people characterise with enjoyment in life is good food. From history, young people have the luxury of eating mostly anything they desire to, ranging from tasty high sugar junk food like pizza, hamburgers and the rest to sumptuous delicacies and cuisines from all over the world like the famous pounded yam and egusi soup of the yoruba tribe in Nigeria. These are not goodies older people can partake in much if at all due to health restrictions or complications that usually come with their advanced years.
Leaving food aside to serious affairs such as life choices, the ball is pretty much in young people's court. Young people are gifted with youth. They are able to wake up one morning and decide to be an engineer or a cook, what ever they set their minds to. On the other hand, the sad thing about being older is that you are set in your ways. The older folks tend to have more regrets in life about decisions they could not take whereas young people have
most of their lives to try out a wide range of activities and make mumerous life changing choices; say a young doctor deciding to transition to an artist.
Ultimately, young people have adulthood and the pleasures it can bring to look forward to in-contrast to their counterparts who reluctantly look forward to death. Not that everyone is not going to die rather young people are generally less worried about this, thus availing them time to enjoy life to the fullest.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...nyone attain the fullest of happiness. Lets start with the mundane things. One of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, thus, whereas, while, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62459546926 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24130068152 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0172588662 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414955657236 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154366647161 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124452342588 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225954590843 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874569699983 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, thus, whereas, while, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments