Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the laws is to make as m

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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the laws, is to make as much money as possible.

It is quite common sense that big companies should take care of societies and environments as well as increase their profits. In regard to this matter, the given prompt presents two contrasting positions: one position is that corporations should be responsible to increase the prosperity of environments and societies and the other is that they are only responsible for increasing their own profits as much as they can. I mostly agree with the former position for two reasons that will be discussed below. However, I do concede that people can benefit from firms when they strive to maximize their own benefits.
First of all, corporations should focus on promoting the well-being of the societies and environments because this action increases their reputation. For example, in the United States, a majority of consumers in Walmart preferred green products that are manufactured in an environment-friendly manner to ordinary ones. That is, they are generally concerned about whether companies care about the environment and are likely to purchase products from these firms. On the other hand, when people receive an overall impression that companies including Amazon and Facebook only care about increasing their profits and neglect the prosperity of societies, people tend to denigrate and boycott them. These examples show that promoting the overall health of societies and environments is crucial for companies since it is directly related to their reputation. If they can enhance their reputation by taking this action, it is highly likely that their overall salaries will increase.
Furthermore, besides improving their reputation that directly relates to their profits, companies should strive to engage in society-friendly and environment-friendly activities due to their significant influence on societies and the environment. For example, a majority of energy uses and rubbish have been known to come from corporations in South Korea since the 21st century. On the other hand, only 10 percent of energy consumption and trash originated from households. Moreover, Samsung, the biggest corporation in South Korea, is known to occupy 7.5 percent of the total gross domestic product in the country, which indicates its considerable control of the economy. These examples present that companies should be socially and environmentally responsible because they have significant power to control societies and environments. Otherwise, the overall social conditions would be deteriorated and flag.
Admittedly, in some cases, companies should concentrate on maximizing their own profits because this act may be beneficial to people, specifically, their employees. For instance, many big tech companies in the United States such as Microsoft and Apple have overall thousands of employees, and as these corporations earn more profits, they are likely to increase the employment scale. This would eventually activate the job market and provide more work for people. This example shows that endeavoring to increase profits may be beneficial to people in terms of their employment. Were it not for the companies’ endeavor to maximize their incomes, the expansion of the job market would not have been significant.
In conclusion, for two reasons as discussed above, I mostly agree that corporations should have a responsibility to increase the overall happiness of societies and to preserve the environment. However, it should not be denied that, in some cases, companies may benefit people as they focus on making more money.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in regard to, in some cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2991.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53888888889 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09562891532 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451851851852 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 932.4 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3399871494 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.043478261 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4782608696 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26086956522 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24967934234 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079772391501 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601737406146 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169243900214 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481861174755 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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