The question on what should be the responsibility of the companies has long been debated within society. While some people deem that the only responsibility for corporations is to make as much money as possible, from a personal viewpoint, it is more leaned towards the idea that they also have the responsibility to promote the well-being of society and environments.
To begin with, it is common for people to first think about profits when the word company or corporation comes to their mind. Admittedly, the success of a corporation is largely evaluated by its seasonal or annual profits and money is the primary tool that helps grow a company, especially when the corporations are on investments and need to grasp opportunities in the market. Without aiming to make profits, the investment companies will soon lose their competitiveness in the market.
However, as a company gradually stabilizes in its structure and pace of growth, making money should not be its primary and only goal. With such an abundance of wealth it owns, the corporation should feel obliged to give back to society and take some responsibility in helping improve the well-being of society. It can make donations such as giving to a university to build a library, or giving to non-profit organizations to help sustain their development and indirectly assist in humanitarian crisis. In this way, with the money they make, corporations can further promote the well-being of society.
Moreover, the responsibility to promote societal welfare can be more greatly demonstrated in corporations involved in the healthcare system. For a corporation such as an engineering company that aims to make prosthesis for patients, its primary goal should be to design the most suitable prosthesis and try to decrease the cost so that the prosthesis can be made available to more patients around the world. If this company only aims to make money, then the price of a prosthesis would be so high that it will only be affordable to people of a higher social class and wealthy. Such a pecuniary goal is against the purpose of the existence of a prosthesis company—to make lives better for patients and promote their well-being.
In conclusion, while in the field of business, most companies aim to make as much money as possible, they should still give back to society and promote societal well-being after they reach a larger and more stable stage. For corporations involved in biomedical field, their primary responsibility should be to improve the health level of patients and set aside the incentive to make as much as possible, which could end up being discriminative to patients that cannot afford a highly priced equipment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...annot afford a highly priced equipment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1334841629 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05093580584 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 712.8 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2795416287 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.266666667 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4666666667 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274061709678 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11110536542 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786672343092 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183897696198 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896921602863 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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