Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
This topic raises two different opinion for funding arts by goverment. One group of people believe that government funding of the art is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. While others are opposite to this and believe that this threatens the integrity of the arts. Both have their on priorities, but I support to fund because it can florish arts and make it to be available to all people.
First of all, funding can increase banality of any perticuler art and its knowledge among people. I would like to point out that more people attract to art which is funded by government. Because of this any art which is unique in its way and have some values,might lose it. As many people make same thing of same art, people can excess to it at cheap rate. This enhances knowledge of art among people. people become more dauntless to show their unique art which not shown earlier anywhere. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that this make art famouse among people.
Furthermore, because of funding one can increase its business realeted to art. Specifically,a person who wants to broach his art throughout country which is right now resticated to perticuler region. Because of this more people come to aknowledge this art and can use it to make their life more beautiful. In addition to this,increase in business of this art, also increase employment throughout the country. Because of that unemployment rates decline and growth of country increases. With the help of funding one can also export this art realted things to different countries and increases business relationship betweeen two country.
Admittedly, government funding of the art threatens the integrity of the arts. This is true when it comes to orignality of that arts. In addition, when one art becomes famous, people try to make replica of that perticuler thing. Because of this people can't come across to what really this art about. However, the above argument does not constitue a sufficient support to claim that government funding of the art threatens the integrity of the arts. Because funding of art has more positive aspects than one negative aspect.
In conclusion, although government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of arts, funding to art is importent which increases employment,GDP,knowledge of art.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s unique in its way and have some values,might lose it. As many people make same thing...
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...enhances knowledge of art among people. people become more dauntless to show their uni...
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...life more beautiful. In addition to this,increase in business of this art, also increase ...
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... make replica of that perticuler thing. Because of this people cant come across to what...
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...ca of that perticuler thing. Because of this people cant come across to what really ...
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...erticuler thing. Because of this people cant come across to what really this art abo...
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...rt threatens the integrity of the arts. Because funding of art has more positive aspect...
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... is importent which increases employment,GDP,knowledge of art.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237875288684 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.161662817552 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0646651270208 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0392609699769 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0369515011547 0.0444667217837 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136258660508 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0184757505774 0.0406280797675 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.8461849056 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0508083140878 0.030933414821 164% => OK
Particles: 0.00230946882217 0.0016655270985 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.0969976905312 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207852193995 0.0249443105267 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0207852193995 0.0148568991511 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2336.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 387.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03617571059 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361757105943 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294573643411 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186046511628 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134366925065 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8461849056 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.6962416762 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.125 23.380412469 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5741073732 59.4972553346 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 23.380412469 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.674092028746 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 45.5823643411 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.65048543689 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.576875106074 0.391690518653 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101388973072 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070110351803 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.54233493014 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144532867986 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23072735214 0.161403998019 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187503071786 0.0892212321368 210% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.481859350954 0.385218514788 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0696172441674 0.0692045440612 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.447414706298 0.275328986314 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170455531202 0.0653680567796 261% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.