Nowadays, people pay more attention to the politics because the world has become much more complex since the 21st century. As for effective political leaders, some people believe that the most important characteristic is to keep committed to principles while others argue that they should give up their principles to get the support from people. In my opinion, I believe that leaders must consider people’s suggestions carefully without changing their goals and principles easily for three reasons.
It is not wise to yield to the public and give up principles easily. Maybe it seems reasonable to take the support from public as the most important issue, because political leaders usually need it to keep in their position. However, in this term, policies may change extremely soon which may deteriorate the livelihood of residents and the credibility of governments. There is a likelihood that many ordinary people may lack the merits needed to do serious political decisions. If it is that case, following public opinion without political leaders’ own opinions would harm the whole country in the long term. And there is also a possibility that compromising may lead to losing the support from people as well as having bad outcome. Thus, leaders shouldn’t abandon all the principles.
As for keeping committed to principles, it would be quite necessary to consider whether the principles and ideas kept by the leaders are correct. Some people simply believe that keeping principles must be an important merit. Take Hitler as an example. He is a quite famous leader with bad reputation. During the 1940s, he has believed that it was critical to kill other people and in order to make profit for his nation. Hitler was committed to his principle and never changed his action. But it was extremely a disaster! Let’s think about Stalin as well. He believed that ordinary people must commit to the nation and do their best to support the development of industry, but it turned out to be a mistake to follow his autocratic government. If the leaders are committed to wrong principles, the situation would be worse.
Even they are committed to wise principles, they still need to consider public opinion. Because the world is becoming more and more complex, and the political situation is always changing. Maybe the principles were true now, but they may not in the future. Also, leaders sometimes ignore the livelihood of ordinary people as well. In essential areas like food supply and education, public suggestions and opinions often play an important role in reflecting the country’s development.
In conclusion, we need to combine these two opinions and find the best solution to possible problems mentioned above. In other words, governments should take public opinion into consideration, but they should not simply follow these suggestions without critical thinking.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, as for, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2425.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21505376344 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76230176096 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490322580645 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.971514849 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2692307692 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8846153846 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73076923077 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370672181794 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931051278504 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711827833556 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188335660509 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848692666534 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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