Some people believe that traveling to and living in numerous places increases one’s ability
to relate and connect to other people. Others believe that this ability is better cultivated by
living in one place and developing a deep understanding of that community.
The world is a amalgamation of different cultures, traditions and different types of people.When a person travels to different places he expands his boundaries of imagination and thinking abilities and is able to view the world through different perspectives.This, according to me, is what increases a man's abilitly to relate and connect with other people.Athough, living in one place may help in developing a deeper understanding of the community, it does not always guarantee that you would be able to connect with everyone else due to several factors.Hence, I believe that travelling to and living in numerous places increases one's ability to relate and connect with other people.My viewpoints are aptly illustrated through the below mentioned examples.
Firstly, travelling to and living in numerous places, enlightens us about the different social and economic conditions that are existing in and around the world. When we explore different places, we deal with a lot of people who have different cultures, demeanor, traditions and hence we are more capable of connecting strongly with them. For instance, consider a travel show host who has travelled different countries during his work. And consider, another employee who has never come out of his work zone and has always spent most of his time staying at one place. The former has the ability to connect with any type of person with whom he encounters , as he has acquired lots of experiences by interacting with different types of people and knows the tact to deal with them. Further the travel show show host is familiar with a lot social conditions that exists in different parts of the world and hence can easily empathise with any other person's sufferings or problems With the help the immense knowledge that he has gained from his travel experiences, he could easily charm other people by imparting his knowledge to them. Thus, he has the ability to attract as well as influence different people.
In addition to the above example, consider a chef from Singapore, who has travelled to different places and has acquired knowledge about the different varieties of cuisines and flavors that exists all over the world. Now since, Singapore is a home to people from different regions and countries, the chef is able to satisfy the needs of different types of people who visit his restaurant. Further, he can easily relate to other people's needs and expectancies and hence is efficient in delivering the best kind of service to them.
However, in contrast to the above statement, it is true that one can relate more to the other people by living only in a particular place and developing a deeper understanding of the community. This is because he can understand the problems and lifestyle of the people of that particular community more accurately by actually living in that place along with those people. But, this kind of approach would cause that person to be acquainted and more familiar with only the people from that community. It cannot be guaranteed that the same person would be able to effectively deal and communicate with any other kind of people.
To sum up, although, staying at a single place can be helpful in developing a deeper understanding of that community by living the same lifestyle as the people of those communities however, travelling and exploring new places allows an individual to experience different situations and deal with different types of people .Consequently this allows to individual to gain different perspectives and hence deal effectively with different people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, kind of, as well as, in contrast to, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 58.6224719101 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2991.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 584.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12157534247 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89760481569 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400684931507 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 945.9 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.469554553 60.3974514979 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.9375 118.986275619 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.21951772744 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299629014707 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110867021116 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903375006722 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198908477648 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852378993467 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.8971910112 504% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 60.0 11.7820224719 509% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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