We can't imagine the world without education in this current era of technology, each one tries to gain education by different means of way. The author of the essay introduces a highly debatable issue that students are more responsible for their education than are teachers. Personally, I am agree in great extent with the given recommendation that students are more responsible than teachers for education. I elaborate my opinion in the following way comprising three reasons as.
Firstly, interest is the foremost means of way to obtain knowledge in any field, students without interest can't achieve knowledge even if teacher encourage by any means. So that, personal interest can be taken as the key of learning in education field. For instance, let's talk about the case, if a student is in a class of mathematics that actually he/she doesn't like then, even teacher is targeting him to teach different techniques of math then, can student perceive those things? Answer is obviously no; if he is in the class of interested subject then he can know a lot without teacher guidance. Also, he can raise different question relating to the interested subject even if teacher is out of those one.
Secondly, student needs to do homework, follow teacher’s guidance, attend exam for securing good knowledge in their daily life. Let’s talk about the two students Ram and Sham were master’s students at Xavier International college Haridwar, India. Ram, used to follow each and every instructions of teacher in class and other activities of life, was very disciplinary person. But Sham was out of rule and regulations of school as well as in home also. After the result of master’s program, result of Ram was outstanding rather than sham but the teacher responsible for both was equal. Here in this case, can we say that teacher is responsible? of course no.
Last but not least, at the early stage of education, students are aware of what is right and wrong, can’t distinguish the right way of learning. At this stage, not only students is responsible but also teacher is the great coach of students. If the guidance of teacher in wrong direction then students can’t learn right things. For instance, teacher is lecturing about ‘Nuclear Energy’ and discusses only about the hydrogen and atomic bomb, it’s aftermath about Hiroshima and Narasimha but doesn’t discusses about the other aspects of nuclear energy as it is a renewable source of energy, different types of power plant projects; what type of knowledge will be disseminated among students? It is sure that students understanding will unidirectional.
At the sum, process of learning depends on student’s interests, dedication, passion, and hardworking in great extend than teacher responsibility. In this era of competition students ought to do more labor oneself than depending on teacher. Above explained different reasons and examples bear this out.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...in any field, students without interest cant achieve knowledge even if teacher encou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...egulations of school as well as in home also. After the result of master's prog...
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Suggestion: Of
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2494.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25052631579 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98087421411 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528421052632 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.4733037256 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7916666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375360107961 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107664532044 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113236095473 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224157766944 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119716726536 0.0667264976115 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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