Students are more responsible for their education than their teachers
I am strongly agree with speaker that student is more responsible for their education than their teachers. Teachers are for supporting and for guiding to student during education of any student.
This issue can be best supported by example when exam of student happen in life. Consider a life of warrior, he learn various fighting style during his education and teachers were there for them for master the skill of fighting style. If warrior itself not take responsibility for learning and mastering those fighting skill then at the time of real fight it will be his life on the risk.
Roll and responsibility of teacher on the other hand is very important for success of any student. Important of teacher role in student life can understood by following example. A good and impact punch in boxing in considered when it was forceful and well directed to target. Adding a force in the punch is responsibility of student but making that punch well directed to target is responsibility of student.
In conclusion we can say that for better education and success in life student has to take a responsibility of his/her education. Teachers will be there for them just to guide and support.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
I am strongly agree with speaker that student is more respo...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...in life. Consider a life of warrior, he learn various fighting style during his educa...
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Suggestion:
...e time of real fight it will be his life on the risk. Roll and responsibility ...
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...fight it will be his life on the risk. Roll and responsibility of teacher on th...
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...to target is responsibility of student. In conclusion we can say that for better...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, well, as for, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 2235.4752809 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89108910891 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80164781291 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 215.323595506 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1281011572 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8181818182 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461243859422 0.243740707755 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183852856709 0.0831039109588 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162528559751 0.0758088955206 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313409447332 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.216846007401 0.0667264976115 325% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 100.480337079 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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