One of the basic needs of a human being is education. An educated person is respected everywhere. One who aims to shine in life must be educated . Without education, no one can even dream to be shine in future. It may be easy to say the word "EDUCATION". But to be an well educated human being, the process is very difficult and lengthy.
During the process, the first man comes to our mind is a "Teacher". Yes, a teacher is indeed an important solution to a man's process of being educated. He/she is very much responsible for one's education. He can guide them and can elucidate all problems one may face during his course of journey towards an educative person. So, a teacher is indeed an essential thing during a person's educational process.
As previously mentioned, teacher is an obvious man for one's educational journey but the main thing or the most important person is himself/ herself as a student. A student is much more responsible for his educational success. A teacher can teach him certain study materials but if he/she doesn't practice those or tries to do that, it will not work for him. The more a student works hard, the more success he will be benefited. He has to believe that he is the one who can lead his nation towards the success.
There are lots of examples in the world who had shone in life by working hard himself/herself. Shakespeare, Tomas Alva Edison etc. men always tried to work hard without proper guidance. they didn't fail to show the result. Shakespeare is one of the most famous author all over the world. Tomas Alva Edison, with his mental effort and hard work succeed in life. Many more examples can be given regarding this issue. The main focus is that if a student has the patient for working hard, he will be succeeded. Yes, he/she may fail certain times but he shouldn't be depressed. Once Robert Bruce tried six times for achieving the kingdom but each he failed. He didn't loose hope. He was patient enough and tried for the seventh time . At that time he was succeeded. A student should be lie this and it is his own responsibility . A teacher can only be there to support him mentally . The real exposure needs to be done by him.
From the above statements it can be concluded that students are far more responsible for their education than their teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78502100432 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498783454988 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0908022825 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.1212121212 118.986275619 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4545454545 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42424242424 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266791042888 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070211630953 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114771268101 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215375987648 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188218119154 0.0667264976115 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 14.1392134831 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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