Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society
Speaker of the issue is considering two most important aspect of life for building a moral society are morality and logical reasoning. Both morality and logical reasoning can build a moral society together. Also, for produce moral society depending on one of two value will not work.
During rudimentary stage of the education some fundamental moral must be teach to person for understanding of society functioning. In support of this point one should know how discipline is important in life. If person is keep breaking law of road than his/her life may in danger due to vehicle on the roads.
On the other hand, following all the old believes blindly is also not good. Any moral and believes should be based on the some correct logical reasoning. For example, according to Hindu believes eating meat in some period of the year should be avoided. Since this believe is based on the position of plants in solar system which create such a atmosphere around earth that in digestion of meat we can face certain problem. On the hand, believe that not eating meat on certain days of week seem has on logical evidence for support.
In conclusion, for building a good moral society morality and logical reasoning need to be teach together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in danger due to vehicle on the roads. On the other hand, following all the old...
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...ral and believes should be based on the some correct logical reasoning. For example,...
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...e period of the year should be avoided. Since this believe is based on the position o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54984231452 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549763033175 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6544305281 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5833333333 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379853795156 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150731894639 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103015059477 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235358084467 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679247518838 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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