Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

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Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

While knowledge is very significant aspect of one's development, it is rather important to make sure that one's knowledge is innocuous to the society. This can be achieved when students are taught some morality along with logic.

All logic and no moral would make a person, machine because that's what machines are, full of logic and no trace of humanity. We being humans, should make sure that we preserve humanity in the coming generations by teaching them ethics and moral values.

If students are taught with the foundation of logic, they would perform some work depending on the outcome and the profit they would gain by doing so, while teaching with a foundation of morality would enhance the more humane side of people, they would think about the society and it's people before taking up some task.

Morality is innate in human beings, they are born with it while logic is something that evolves during our lifetime, hence the foundation of education should be something that we possess naturally.

Although logical reasoning is important to one's active development, so it cannot be ignored. To comprehend most courses like science, math, medicine etc a strong logical reasoning is expected. So it would be preposterous to ignore logical reasoning in the education. Therefore, logical reasoning should also be an emphasis in the education but after moral values because there is a huge difference in producing knowledgable people and wise people. Knowledgable people know things but don't know what to do with them whereas wise people have knowledge as well as good decision making, which is what is required in the society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10037174721 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60732374631 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8546087888 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390625374377 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138178979324 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734348325189 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195877065291 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618110202015 0.0667264976115 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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