The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and t

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The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

Nations take pride in accomplishments of individuals, especially in the twenty-first century in which individuals’ globally recognized achievements are deemed invaluable to a nation’s asset and paramount to its competitiveness across the globe. Countries have always aspired to leave an indelible imprint on the world’s map and therefore underscored the importance of advancing certain fields of knowledge, such as science or art or humanities. Granted, making a nation great cannot be solely contingent upon the aforementioned. The welfare of the nation’s people is considered critical since people are more likely to contribute more to a nation should they are guaranteed a carefree life by the nation. Before any discussion is pursued or any stance is taken up, however, one needs to first define the word “great.”
When it comes to assaying the success or the flourishing of a given nation, what indicators are capitalized on? What makes a nation great? Is it determined by the level of education that people receive? Is it decided by how robust the economy is? Is it settled by how safe people feel? Tackling this question can in fact commence from the definition of what great men are in history. Do great men in history get their accolade for their wealth? Do they receive their veneration for their education? Do they obtain their recognition for their cerebral achievements? No! Great men in history better human races, advance human civilizations, and most importantly, contribute to the general welfare of all human populations. Take Albert Einstein. His discovery of relativity has led to a world replete with far-reaching implications and advancements. He is considered great. Another relevant example is Martin L. King Jr. His impassioned and uncompromising spirit to advocate for equal civil rights has landed himself as a beacon in the Civil Rights Movement in 1954 in the United States. He is considered great. Another comes from Nelson Mandela, who is globally applauded and recognized for having freed South African from apartheid. He is considered great. One can readily discern the common denominator shared among these people: they all channel human races into an era where humans are free, spiritually and physically. History is forever transmogrified by these people’s achievements and sacrifices. If these men are unanimously considered “great,” one can certainly extend the analogy and the reasoning and make a cogent argument that a great nation is composed of these great people and these great people can be rulers, artists, or scientists. Consider Nelson Mandela again. He was the anti-apartheid revolutionary and at the same time, the President of South Africa from 1994 to 1999. His legacy and political achievements has made him the father of the nation and a global icon for his anti-racist and anti-colonial advocation. One can therefore asseverate that the surest indicator of a great nation can be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, as evidenced by the exemplar of Nelson Mandela.
Furthermore, the underlying foundation of people’s welfare and a nation’s prosperity stems from breakthroughs or achievements that rulers, scientists, or artists demonstrate. To wit, the most elemental element to ensure a great nation’s well-being or thriving For instance, Edward Jenner, also the father of immunology, is the pioneer of smallpox vaccine, without which, the rampage of small pox might have still pervaded and plagued human beings. Jenner’s scientific findings and discoveries made English a strong and puissant nation in the eighteenth century. Michelangelo, a world-wide renowned Italian artist, devised clever ways to paint frescos by using scaffolds and a wide variety of painting techniques to make the paintings sink into and glued to the walls as fast as possible. His ingenious drowning techniques not only help polarize frescoes used in churches but also makes Italy the hub of artistic achievements, Renaissance taking place in Italy being one prime example.
However, sometimes, one cannot entirely overlook the robustness of welfare that a nation’s people have when appraising whether a nation is great or not. Switzerland has one of the nicely-orchestrated health care systems in the world, where people can therefore be freed from the taxing medication fee and nearly-impossible affordability of prescription, even though reports pertinent of Switzerland having luminous scientists or phenomenal artists or world-changing leaders are rarely heard of. Notwithstanding this, the line of reasoning still needs to be further analyzed and studied. Without the achievements of Swiss scientists researching the most efficacious vaccines, injections, talents, and the like and Swiss rulers enacting health laws, could Switzerland relish the prestige and the fame of possessing the best health care system in the world? Without a proper enactment of health care laws and systems by rulers and law-makers, how can Swiss denizens embrace the boons of its health care system?
Although there are still many points in the prompt that may render more and further discussions, it is logically insufficient to state that the surest indicator of a great nation comes from the welfare of all its people. Indeed, welfare has its role and appeals that may serve as a good indicator of a great nation, but the most important factor that settles down this issue can be traced back to the achievements of a nation’s rulers, artists, and scientists.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 45.0 14.8657303371 303% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 58.6224719101 174% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4716.0 2235.4752809 211% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 863.0 442.535393258 195% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46465816918 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.42004258684 4.55969084622 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26284910057 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 435.0 215.323595506 202% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50405561993 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 1468.8 704.065955056 209% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 20.2370786517 203% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.5295712314 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.024390244 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0487804878 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75609756098 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 29.0 10.2758426966 282% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211317824038 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482263316833 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583321628338 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134131182283 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740055681865 0.0667264976115 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 259.0 100.480337079 258% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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