Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling reaso

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Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Students’ academic performance may be an element to take into account when remunerating a teacher. Nevertheless, it cannot be the only aspect to considerate as several factors influence scholars’ grades. These may not be related to professor teaching capabilities, such as school’ resources and endowments and the environment in which a student lives and grows. In addition, teachers’ compensations could be based also on non-performance factors, namely, the working commitment or the students’ happiness of the teaching method.

External factors, independent from the teacher’s behaviour, can influence the learning phase of scholars either in a positive or negative way, impacting their academic performance. Hence, one may doubt whether professors’ wages should be anchored to this parameter. This idea can be more easily visualised if we think about school inhomogeneity among mainly white and black’s neighbourhoods in United States. Undoubtedly, the former is characterised by schools that have more teaching resources - compared to the latter - as digital whiteboards in classrooms, laboratories where scholars can conduct experiments and a plenty of sport fields where they can practice and improve athletic skills. Furthermore, growing in a well-off family lessen the difficulty to overcome mayor life’s obstacles. This is since living in a wealthy family allows, for instance, a child to not worry about economic issues and to focus on his education and future. It gives him the access to every opportunity.
Since in US black’s families are statistically poorer than white’s, the first category of students may excel more than the second one, given the same level of teachers’ instructions and teaching skills.

Moreover, one may think that other aspects, in addition to the potentially biased academic performance, should be taken into account, when computing teacher’s salaries, in order to establish a fair evaluation. The higher effort of a teacher could be rewarded with a more consistent wage. Actually, a professor that tries her best to teach scholars and that is able to turn on their curiosity and interest should be remunerated with a greater salary. Accordingly, receiving a fixed amount of cash each month, independently by the progression of students, could incentivised teachers to work passively, making the minimum effort. In addition, another interesting measure of teachers’ salary could be the happiness of students, related to the teaching performance of professors. The application of this idea could attribute to students a consistent power position as their opinion would influence the monthly monetary amount that professors receive. It could seem as a form of coercion/blackmail, even though it would guarantee the non-existence of improper behaviours from the teaching faculty.

A legitimate objection to what has been stated in the previous paragraph is that these two aspects are difficult to measure and thus to use concretely in the computation of wages. As a consequence, an opponent could argue that the only available measure - even if it lacks perfection - is the academic performance. That is since the two additional measurements are qualitative, whereas the former is a quantitative tool, which is obtained from examinations. Notwithstanding, it could be possible to convert qualitative aspects into quantitative data, through specific evaluation tests, which could determine a happiness-teaching index and a commitment index. The former could be evaluated by students, while the latter could be produced by the analysis of an external supervisor.

Summing up, teachers’ salaries should be influenced not only by academic performance - since it may be biased - but also but other factors which consider the students’ opinion of professors and the real efforts engaged by teachers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3290.0 2235.4752809 147% => OK
No of words: 581.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66265060241 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31991461827 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533562822719 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 1013.4 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6414717064 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.24 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224772441716 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678404763384 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590354237427 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133733803303 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750556984123 0.0667264976115 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 184.0 100.480337079 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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