Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Teaching is one of the most noble jobs in the world. A teacher is one of the most crucial prople in a child's life who play a primary role in shaping his process of thinking from his early
age. A successful teacher is the one who instills the proper thirst for knowledge in his/her students. The role of a teacher in educating our society is undeniably significant. Hence, the
salaries of teachers' should not be based on a single factor - thier students' academic performance, rather than many other important factors indicating the teachers' ability to teach
and educate in efficient way.
Firstly, the academic performance of students cannot provide sufficient evidence of their teachers' teaching methods. A student's academic result doesn't solely depend on the lectures
and teachings provided by his teachers in the classroom. His academic result reflects the overall academic activities including class lecture, home work, his mental ability, the amount
of study been invested in study at home etc. Since all of these facts are responsible for a student's academic performance, his academic performance should not be considered as the only
factor of his teachers performance in class and the teachers' salaries should not be based on their students' academic performances only.
Again, the role of a teacher in not bounded by only teaching in the classroom and making the students well prepared for academic performance. A teacher has many roles to play in our
society rather than only providing academic knowledge. A good teacher always tries to develop a student's sense of ethics and logics since his early age. A good teacher will try to bring
out the best from his students' regardless of the constraints the students face in learning period. A good teacher is the one who creates the thirst of knowledge in his students' mind
and will pave the way of learning from any situation at any circumstance. All these attributes of a good teacher are not measurable by the academic perfomance of their students. Hence,
the statement regarding the salary structuring of teachers should not be followed.
Furthermore, if we differentiate teachers' salaries based on their students' academic perfomancee, this will create a negative impact in the overall teaching system. The teachers who will
be paid less than the others might be morally demotivated thinking that his/her teachings in the classroom is not being efficient enough to be paid euqal to others. This low spirit in
his/her mind would eventually affect his moral spirit in the classrroom and so the teaching perfomance. Again, if a salary structure is made based on the students' academic performance,
that would create an extra pressur on the students' mental health as most of the teachers would try to bring out the best academic performance from their students by any means. As a result,
a negative impact will be inevitable in the whole process of teaching.
In conclusion, as we know teaching is one of the most noble professions in the world, we should be more deliberate in structuring the salaries of our teachers considering all the quantitative
and qualitative role played by the teachers in the classrooms rather than judging on only one basis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, still, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2719.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 528.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14962121212 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83067257306 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.397727272727 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 835.2 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 15.0 4.99550561798 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7868246222 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.590909091 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.97078651685 402% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531189869406 0.243740707755 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177214165307 0.0831039109588 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15706567431 0.0758088955206 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198186241259 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166924593359 0.0667264976115 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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