Laws are made to prevent chaos and provide justice. The writer believes that laws that don't provide justice need to be disobeyed and ones that do need to be obeyed. Now while I definitely agree with the latter part, I am a little hesitant to agree with the former part. I obviously do agree that unjust laws have no place in any constitution, when it comes down to protesting against such laws, it is a bit unfair to say that everyone should rise up against it.
No one wants unjust laws, unless they are benefiting from it. In governments where we see the presence of unjust laws, it is because someone somewhere is benefiting from it. Chances are that this person or these people who benefit from such a law are rich and powerful. These people are above the law. And the unjust law or laws in place are bringing them more money and more power. If the laws are suddenly not as lucrative as before, things will change. This is essentially the only way that these laws are going to go under a reform.
Protesting can certainly be helpful. But it is going to take time. This is why it is unfair to expect everyone to immediately disobey an unjust law. Fair or not, these laws are laws. Disobeying them will result in punishment for the delinquent. Therefore, though people are not exactly happy about the existence of said law, they are not going to protest it alone. As I said it requires time to figure out who is going to stand beside you and fight.
Another issue we run into here, is that governments who impose these unfair laws, are not going to kindly change the laws as soon as they see the first protest. The people that are benefiting from the unjust law are likely paying a staggering amount of money to the government. Even democratic governments are not always interested in their people's interests. What can we expect from a tyrannical one? And so begins the tear gasses and batons and other, much more brutal, methods of silencing people.
The uproar is usually going to arrive in waves. The people who are fed up with their undemocratic government are going to rise up and come to the streets, forming the first wave. Once they receive their beating from the riot police, they are going to run back to their houses, hoping they don't get arrested or injured. After a while the second wave will start. This is where the real tragedy occurs. People are now much more scared than before. The government is much more alert and ready. This time there is going to be many more arrests and injuries.
Don't get me wrong. I am not doubting the power of the people. Many tyrannical governments have been overthrown or reformed because of people's protests and riots. However, it is naive to even hint that the people of undemocratic countries have not thought about change. If the change is happening, it is because of how difficult the whole process is. Whether we are talking about a simple reform or a revolution, the process is by no means made of easy tasks.
To wrap it up, I do believe that unjust laws should perish. But we do need to realize what a difficult task this is going to be. There are going to be major pushbacks, both from the government and from the people who are either supportive of the government or are too afraid of it to come to the streets.
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...o run back to their houses, hoping they dont get arrested or injured. After a while ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 49.0 19.5258426966 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2704.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 595.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54453781513 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3829574026 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445378151261 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 857.7 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.2370786517 198% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9062266043 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.875 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 24.0 5.13820224719 467% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216520211164 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599871638728 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773300842177 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119784417384 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825579221583 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 48.8420337079 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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